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I walk around trees
wondering why i must cry
then I sit and die
- Title: under a tree
- Artist: iimN0th1n
- Description: why
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: under tree
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Comments (7 Comments)
- adorable a s i a n - 04/02/2012
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Haiku, traditional Japanese ones at least, usually have some sort of allusion to a season.
Other than that, it's unique. - Report As Spam
- botdfcat - 07/08/2011
- i liked your haiku
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- boredbuthappy - 09/01/2010
- that is sad but at least u tried i know a lot of ppl who think poetry is for sissies
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- Lady Acire - 10/02/2009
- uh ok..
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- ValiantFlame - 09/01/2009
- Too short and not very powerful...
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- yats34 - 07/11/2009
- nice, but a little on the emo side. try writing about happiness or something. all the stuff i read on here is dark and depressing. laugh a little, will ya??
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- DLneostarG - 06/08/2009
- u can read mine if u want 2. Spread the Word ok??
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