Beleving in daddy

• Artist: ix_cherry_pop_ix
• Description: this poor little 5 year old girl's dad died but she beives that he is going to came bak. how sad is that !!
• Date: 11/26/2008
• Tags: beleving daddy

''Hi daddy. today we got a new student. yea daddy she is very nice. Daddy when are u coming bak? i miss u . Why did u leave? daddy do u love me? I kno u r coming bak! mommy said u werent coming bak but i told her she was wrong.''This girl would prray everyday that her dad would come bak but he never did. Now the girl is about to die and join her dad at last she prayed to her dad and told him she was coming. She comited suisied just to be with her dad now every night her mom cries and prays that they r okay. now guess what the mom is going to do to herself...............*gun sound* rest in peace little family crying crying

Comments

[yoshi975]

gosh this is really sad and kinda disturbing and your like *gun sound* was pretty disturbing too

[babymoth]

sorta sad. not real, but im in a good mood, so i'll give you 4/5

[Chocolate cheesepuff joe]

you know whats sad this people posting rude comments just becuse they dont like it and you have to think when you read a story is it true or not in this case most of it is true becuse a few years back my friend did the same thing his dad was dead 5 years and his mom decided not to tell him and he killed himself*sobs*

[zox-emo-roxas-xoz]

Suicidesoldier#1 I agree with everything you said. Shame on the people who actually liked this, you need to read something good, like Fade or Impulse.

[zox-emo-roxas-xoz]

Very poor piece of writing. I hope you don't plan to actually do be a writer, because you are very illiterate. Storyline is horrible, and you used emotions and chatspeak in your piece. It's know, with a 'w', and are isn't spelled 'r'. I hope you're young.

[Uncreativegamer]

... yeah this was stupid like serius ly her dad dies she commits suicide and the mom Bounce-back shoots herself
Whats wrong with this? (1 star, sorry look at my submissions to set a avrg or higher)

[Ethnic-Kiss]

omg thts rele sad an its true! crying