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Alice was reading a book with her mother on top of a tree. Then, she fell asleep, and fell out of it. When she woke up, her mother wasn't there. She walked over to the lake near the woods, and peered in. There, in the reflection, she saw a white face, with dark eyes, and when she opened her mouth, she saw fangs poking from the side of her mouth.
All of a sudden, she heard a noise in the woods, and it was getting closer, and closer. Then out popped a white rabbit. "I'm late, I'm late, I'm la....." The rabbit looked up from his watch, and stared at the sight in front of him. All was quiet except for the ticking of his watch. "tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock" Alice smiled, and her fangs popped out, and the White Rabbit's eyes bulged. He was to terrified to move though. "tick-tock, tick-tock" Then, as the White Rabbit made the slightset move, Alice lunged. She pounced on the rabbit, and sank her teeth into his neck. Then, as the Rabbit's fur was soaked, in blood, and his body went limp, the clock, "tick-tock..." stopped working.
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- by Sweet_Papaya |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/19/2008 |
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- Title: Alice in Underland
- Artist: Sweet_Papaya
- Description: This gives Alice In Wonderland a new twist!!
- Date: 10/19/2008
- Tags: alice underland
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Comments (5 Comments)
- EmoBananasStoleMyHomework - 02/15/2009
- zomg!!!! vampire!! : D
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- Izluide - 12/05/2008
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Wasn't not want
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- Izluide - 12/05/2008
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nice and interesting! you could have been more descriptive on the change........ identify why Alice want hurt from the fall....???
other than that you did well! - Report As Spam
- XxXkimchi_and_chowderXxX - 10/26/2008
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O___O
OMG!she bit the rabbit!interestin story!
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- XxEmoBlondexX - 10/19/2008
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HAHHAHAHA
luv it!
HAHAHHAHA
take that rabbit
i would have too
it would have ben soo annoying!
tick tock
buahaha 5'd - Report As Spam