- Red had gotten hired to kill anouther vampire but this one was a pure blood. He had been sent through a portel to the Vampires castle. The portal finally spits him out and he lands in a large empty room in what looks like a bed room. A lady lay there dead her neck bitten through and blood drained. He pulls out 4 twelve inch throwing needles that he was deadly with. Red rarly ever missed while using them. Red slowly cracked the door and then looked out. The sound of metal clanging he slowly moved into the room waited for the guard to pass. Quickly Red jumped out and grabed him from behind. Using the needles he cut into the mans throught. Blood started to spray everywhere, the mans vocal coards cut so he could not scream out in pain as he died. Red then pulled the man into the room and layed him on top of the dead lady. He looked at them and shook his head. "That dont look right." He then runs out of the room and goes into the hall. He ran through hallways looking around corners for this castles master. He then slowly crept around a corner and then three vampires jumped down from the ceiling. He throw the needle at one and it landed in the vampires leg. He screamed in pain as his leg burned fell off. "Its silver. How can you hold silver when you are a vampire?" Red just smiled as he ran up and stabed him in the heart. The vampire busted into flames and he turned to the others but they had ran off to warn the others.
- by Bluenekofox |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/05/2008 |
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- Title: Red the vampire Part 1
- Artist: Bluenekofox
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Name: Red Rain
Bio: Red is a kind person in his own way but you dont want to get on his bad side. - Date: 08/05/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- reallytinyroxy - 01/25/2009
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OMG I love it more more!!!!!!!!!
I do not care about the grammer in fact my grammer and spelling is bad to!! - Report As Spam
- Gymnast Castor - 01/25/2009
- why is red killing vampires? Who hired him to do so?
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- Fun the End - 01/12/2009
- As the others said, plus there's a good amount of bad spelling.
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- KCO_rocks - 01/11/2009
- rushed and poor grammar
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- bunniluver - 08/06/2008
- It seems really rushed. Also, you didn't pay attention to puncuation and grammar. If you work on the basics, you should get better.
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