- as i lay there next to the dead body of my mother in a cold puddle of blood in sorrow for the death and not being able to save her i am tooken by the demons of the hells i am killed and raped every day because of the curse set upon me that only my mom could seal she dead everyones gone the world has come to a hault i wish i could just save it watch it move and kill the demons that killed me i am in a puddle of blood in the depths of my soul crying,killing,destroying. the powers among me have destroyed the very beings of the souls of planets and people. i am dead we all r but the only thing to help is the tortured souls of the ones destroyed on that day. they shall battle till the death of the demons as the angels join our side we slaughter them all me and my mom see eachother again and we r the happiest ever but then she dies in spirit form just for life to repeat again and agian as it should never do but it is. the worl are gone we r all dead.
- by Lord Mega naruto |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/24/2008 |
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- Title: the tragic end
- Artist: Lord Mega naruto
- Description: it is bassically something i wrote in the time i had it is well summer vaca for me and wed have nothen to do really so i wrote this hope u like it though it is goth or more emo than goth i guess
- Date: 07/24/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- SDK Manga Girl - 08/14/2010
- ehh i've seen better but as a rating, 3 stars out of 5. very good plot though. but the end was too abrupt and simple. this is only my opinion! =]
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- gil is a patella - 11/18/2008
- When you bother to type properly, I'll bother to read it.
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- kittypuss123 - 07/25/2008
- hahahahaha XD omg i love this story smile expecially the rape part. quote "demons of the hells i am killed and raped every day" hahahah raped....
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- Lt. Maguechi - 07/24/2008
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i really really liked it lol.
its so deep and... i dont know i just liked it, ya your grammer and spelling isnt all that great but when you read it, it doesnt really matter u know cuz its just so.. good lol. good job.
i like you. your good lol.
yay 5/5 (except the spelling lol) =) - Report As Spam
- Evanescently - 07/24/2008
- Fix your spelling and grammar. I don't know what the heck you are trying to get at here.
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