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The Scariest Story Ever
One day a boy named Benjamin Wilson, was making a wish on a star. He did not know that the wish he would be making would change his life forever.
It was late one night, when Ben was looking at the stars. He had heard that if you wish on the first star you see, your wish will become true. So he spotted the first star that he saw, and he made a wish on it. His wish was that whatever he said or did, for it to come true. So for instance if he would say "Let it snow" it would snow.
Just a few days later, he was sitting in Geometry class wondering about the test they would have in about 5 minutes. When he got the test, he sat there wishing that he would ace the test. He took the test that was supposed to be very hard and he thought that it was easy. He got it back and it was an A+. he was amazed because he had never had a test and aced it before, and this test was probably the hardest one that he had ever taken. He asked all his classmates what they had gotten on the test and they all replied " A C+ or lower.Ben was very excited that he had gotten a better grade than Chris, who was an A+ student ,and Chris had made a C-.
There was this one kid that Ben did not like. He wished that something bad would happen to him. The very next day he was out of school. Ben asked his teacher where he was he said " He is in the hospital with a very deadly disease. It came on him so fast, and none of the doctors have a cure. It is really weird. I have never seen anything like it."
The very next day, Ben heard that the kid with the deadly disease had died. Ben was upset about the whole situation. He knew that it was his fault that he had died . So he went to his funeral with sorrow and regret.
He was at home, alone, late one night. All of a sudden the phone rang. He ran down the steps to answer it thinking that it might be his parents. He picked up the phone and he heard the dial tone. He thought to himself "That's weird" and then he went back up to his room thinking no more about it. This happened several more times and he still ignored it. Then all of a sudden the door bell rang. He went down to answer it again thinking that it might be his best friend Jarred. He opened the door and said "Hey Jarred......what's....." but then he noticed that no one was there. He thought to himself "It must be those little kids that live down the street prank calling and ringing the doorbell and running." So he then went back up the stairs to his room, thinking no more of it. Then there was a peck on the window. He was really starting to get kind of scared and curious. He went to the window, opened it and yelled "Get out of here you little kids!!" But still he saw no one. Since it was starting to get really freaky, he decided to go and watch some T.V. He flipped on the T.V. and right then the power went out. He knew that the kids couldn't have done something like that because he didn't have a fuse box. He now realized that the kids couldn't have done any of the other things now, and he was starting to get really scared. He went and got a flash light and he saw red eyes across the room and was coming very fast towards him. He all of a sudden heard a low, creepy, but familiar voice calling " Ben..........Ben...........Ben.....how could you do something like this to me?" Ben replied "Who are you? What do you want from me? I have no clue what you're talking about." The voice replied "You do know what I'm talking about Benjamin Wilson."All of a sudden, it jumped out behind the shadows and Charlie saw a beaten, flesh removed, kid that Ben recognized as the kid that he had wished that something bad would happen to. His eyes were blood red, and the flesh that he had left was purple and blue. Ben was scared to death. He told the kid that he had never meant for him to be killed or even hurt, but he didn't believe him. The kid replied "Now it is your turn to follow the pain and death that I had suffered through." Then the kid took Ben out of the house, and tied him up to a tree. The kid then dug a huge hole and then untied Ben. The ghost said to him," I'm sorry that it has to end this way Ben, but this is what you have to repay me by doing. Good-Bye Ben!" Then the kid threw Ben in the hole and buried him alive.
No one really knew what had happened to Benjamin Wilson. Until one day a clipping all of a sudden appeared in the newspaper telling what had happened and who had actually killed the kid that Ben didn't like. I am telling you now, be careful what you wish for because it just might come true.
*****This is not a true story,or maybe it is?*****
Like the story comment and vote this is my best one yet.I give it a 5.What about you.Remember if you want to be in a story give me a topic and I will make one.I put myself in all my stories.Thanks for reading
By:Benjamin Wilson
- by Rockerben360-New Cloud- |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/20/2008 |
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- Title: A Scary Story
- Artist: Rockerben360-New Cloud-
- Description: Be careful of what you wish for you might regret it.Its scary alright read comment and vote please tell me what you think.
- Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: ascarystory
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Comments (7 Comments)
- keeralee - 03/04/2009
- I liked it was awesome i give it a five.
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- Clara Clarkson - 01/26/2009
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ahahahhahahahahhahahahhaa
you're that BENJAMIN WILSON
hahah
can't stop laughing
and summore you put this into non-fiction
hahaha
good story, benjamin wilson who died at the end of story xD - Report As Spam
- Rockerben360-New Cloud- - 07/22/2008
- look again its says fiction yeah and im the one that made the story when i was bored.
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- Kyoto Night Dragon44 - 07/21/2008
- It's just like the monkey paw story. Same concept. It wasnt that scary. And, this is the NON fiction section. For REAL stories.
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- Kirakai_momohara_wolf - 07/21/2008
- nice story!No offense but it needs to be a little scarier but its seriously really good.
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- Rockerben360-New Cloud- - 07/21/2008
- hey julia dream its good grammar idiot.like you could do better.
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- Julia Dream - 07/20/2008
- Needs a lot - and I do mean a LOT - of work. Spelling, grammar, sentence structure. And that's just the technical stuff - you've also got zero storytelling going on here, no emotion, no tone, nothing. You're doing the thing where you TELL us it's a scary story, but you don't SHOW us, and writing - good writing - is showing, not telling.
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