- roses are red violets are blue love is sweet but not as sweet as u my dear love ... we brake up i wish i with we hadent i have my regrets my love ... in a woreled whar love was love and we had haet as haet is one good woreled but in fantesy my love are whar dreams come true my love i love u so so go on leave me here and go to ur fantisy when u get back ill take you to myen my fantesy is graet my love but not like you you changed my worled i love you so my love i just with it had never came ...the day we split... was the sadest moment of my live ... you maed me cri so much hatred my fantesy fell... my love you bring my life so much joy... but know what? wev only a long time befor the role for us is over and we die ... but hay maby lukaly well meet up agen and alive on this earth ... with a new role to live ... if u think about it maby if you can belive only once my dear ... my love for you is grator than i love mysellf and thats hard to beat ... my love if only the day hadednt come i with gratly so vary gratly ... my love i will miss you so come along and ried a dragon maby even get something of valu ... like my haret to yours my love i shal miss u graetly so vary much i love you my love you dont have to retunr my love love but just to let you know i love you and that shan never change ... maby in fantisy we shal be together agen but for know wer frends and i love you dearly my love ... just to tell you my love i shal never not love you ... i love you more than anything more than live its self id give anything for you my love and thats that .
- by eeveelover24 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/08/2008 |
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- Title: fantisy worled
- Artist: eeveelover24
- Description: i was sad for some reson and roet this out of memory cuz i dident have papor so yah i dident riet it down hope u engoy
- Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: fantisy worled
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Comments (7 Comments)
- mixmixalot - 08/21/2023
- diz is gud
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- ashley_bear_12345 - 03/03/2012
- can u plz learn proper grammar?
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- Ekhie - 05/10/2010
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Is English your first language? >.>
And if it is, how OLD are you?
Most people with a middle school education, at least, could at least spell better than this.
I agree, there are too many mistakes to make it understandable.
Wrong category/ genre, I believe. - Report As Spam
- skellington453 - 10/12/2009
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there is a thing called spell check. you should try it.
i wrote something too. called unknown betrayal. look it up? - Report As Spam
- Darkness Remainss - 08/14/2009
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Spell Check Please
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- Robot Squirrel - 01/25/2009
- I couldn't read it because there were too many spelling errors.
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- SorenKrane - 01/15/2009
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I agree with Skyroller. Spell check helps too.
It would be fine if you used spaces and spell checked. Then it might make sense.
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