my days as a teen

• Artist: xxbabypepexx
• Description: i hope you like it very much because i worked hard to make this so comment and rate
• Date: 06/01/2009
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my days as a teen were very mean
people liked to fight and didn't listen
it was rough,tough and i had enough
i left school at fifteen to try and get into another school to be a better teen
i couldn't get into any other school i wondered why was i such a fool
my mother said it will be ok untill the next day
my best friend had died in a fight
with a gun shot inside her chest i began to cry it was a bloody mess
school was tough in the old days yes it was
but now we began to show love

Comments

[Ailing Pancakes]

this is very good writing smile

[Musically Intoxicated]

There are some punctuation errors, and you might want to make it rhyme. But overall, it's pretty good smile

[i_love_vampys]

ome thats like really sad crying

[crumcrum]

is it true tho?

[xxbabypepexx]

i know right it was very hard

[sporks_102]

wow
thats rough 2 go thru that in ur highschool years
hope that ur life afterward overshadows those years
smile