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Part One.
I paced in front of the burly men who called themselves sailors.
I was wearing a smile. A cute smile, like I wasn't a pirate.
Much less the captain of the Nightengale.
Some sailors smiled and waved at me.
That was ENOUGH.
I pulled out the flintlock rifle of my belt loop and shot it into the air.
The talking and waving ceased.
"'Ello everyone." I greeted them.
"Me name is Isabella.
To those who make the crew, I'm Captain Isabella."
I giggled a little, seeing the astonished experssions on their sunburnt faces.
I stopped giggling and straightened out my act.
"Here you must choose land," I pointed to the ground and stomped.
"Or sea." I turned around and pointed at the ocean.
A sudden sweep of clamness sweeped over me. I continued.
"As you must know,
Once part of the Nightengale's crew,"
I smiled and turned back around.
"Always part of the Nightengale's crew 'til I die or the ship sinks."
I watched as some small children walked away, sad.
Some men joined them.
I smirked.
"We've weeded out the weaklings!" I called out.
I then heard nervous chuckling.
"My new crew has some weaponry expections."
I pulled two boxes from behind me.
I opened each one and displayed them.
"Which do you choose?" I asked.
One was a well decorated, shiny, and fake sword.
The other was slightly rusted and wasn't.
"Choice A?" I asked.
29 hand were raised.
"You all may leave."
I picked up the sword and it wobbled and broke in my hand.
They grunted and cursed under their breaths as they left my pressence.
21 were left.
- by -GracedWithPoetry- |
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- | Submitted on 05/01/2010 |
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- Title: The Nightengale's Song. Pt.1
- Artist: -GracedWithPoetry-
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Part one of chapter one of
The Journals of Captain Isabella: The Nightengale's Song.
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-Chinni102 - Date: 05/01/2010
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- -GracedWithPoetry- - 05/03/2010
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- CrimsonTigerDriver - 05/02/2010
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- Mizuki Kanamashiru - 05/02/2010
- Random comment, nice part one! biggrin Can't wait for part 2, 5/5!
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