- The monster shoved Alice up, leaving her in the air. She went down with her sword, and cut the head of the monster. She hit the ground, feeling amazed at what she did. She slayed the Jabbowockee. Alice Kingsleigh was the champion. Terrence stopped fighting. The Mad Hatter stopped fighting. Everything ended. The Red Queen stared at Alice, wide-eyed. The White Queen just smiled. The White Queen was now the ruler of Underland, now Wonderland. The Red Queen was sent into exile along with her accomplice. The White Queen put a vile up to the Jabbowockee's tooth, and it's blood slithered down. She closed the vile. "The blood of the Jabbowockee will give you the one thing you want. Use it wisely," she said. "I want to go home," said Alice. "Wait!" Terrence shouted. Alice turned around. "What?" Terrence looked her in the eye. "Promise me that you'll come back to Wonderland and visit us," he said. " I promise," said Alice. And with that, she popped open the vile, and the purple liquid flowed down, into her mouth. Alice took one last look at the world she didn't believe in before, and smiled sadly, then was enveloped into darkness. When she saw light, she was in the rabbit hole she was in when she went to Underland. Then, she remembered the promise she made to Terrence, the promise of her lifetime. She would keep it, and go back soon. She made sure she would.
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- Title: Promise of a Lifetime
- Artist: vertigo-essence
- Description: my point of view for if in alice in wonderland, there was a guy in the picture. btw, this starts from when alice slays the jabbowockee, or whatever. Terrence is the guy. hope you don't mind if its too short!
- Date: 03/14/2010
- Tags: promise lifetime
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- Lord Forestheart - 04/13/2010
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I did not like the movie, which biases my judgement on this, but ok.
It seems good, but I would put in some more creative elements into it, instead of copying straight from the movie.
Other than that, great. 5/5 - Report As Spam