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Vintage
Vintage?
What is it?
Is it old style or old school?
Is it bold beyond compare?
Or soft and fades in the back?
Does its colors entrance you?
Does its hues charm you?
Can it attract crowds of people?
Or push them away?
Will it blossom for you?
Or blossom for me?
Will it blossom at all?
Did you know that my shirt is considered that so called "vintage"?
Probably not
You never really do
I just stand behind you
A follower in the crowd
Only considered a classmate
Nothing more
Nothing less... I hope
I might get a "Hi"
A simple "Hi" and my heart pounds
Your voice haunts my dreams
Dreams of you and me
Dreams of this true love
Your out look plagues my fears
Fears this is all for nothing
Fears this is a hopeless unrequited love
But you wouldn't know
How could you?
You could just turn an eye in my direction
But I guess that's too much to ask
So stay ignorant
Of life
Of your secret admirer
Of me
And my so called "vintage"!
- by luvd_n_forgotten |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/17/2009 |
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- Title: Vintage
- Artist: luvd_n_forgotten
- Description: Havent added one in awhile.... Its about a girl and her secret crush and a guy who doesnt notice even a bit... SO check outt! Imm bakk.. <3 Comment
- Date: 12/17/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- doctoriceandfire natsu - 09/02/2014
- i thank this is supost be in poem not fiction
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- piemanpie24 - 07/09/2012
- The world needs more Hipster poetry. Keep at it, I guess.
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- luvd_n_forgotten - 07/05/2010
- thnkks for the comments everyone on my poem. I will try to mke more like it... :}
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- Morbid Humour - 07/05/2010
- Wow. It is very intriguing. I really love your word choice. ;D
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- YamiYin666 - 06/10/2010
- its really good, love it <3
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- redblazeloves - 01/08/2010
- i like iit. sounds more like poetry but i do like it
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- Althean Witch - 12/27/2009
- I think this belongs in the poetry section...but anyways, not bad.
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