- I had a friend a long time ago. It was a stormy night and we were having a slumber party when the lights went out. When the storm ended my friend was miss. For days the cops searched and couldn't find her. One morning I woke up and their was an angel next to me. The angel looked very sad. I asked the angel this"Why so sad?" thats when I noticed the angels wings were ripped and tattered. I wondered how she got such an injury. The next thing I know my friend is next to me. My parents walk in and scream. I tried to tell them I was there but they acted as if they hadn't heard me. The angel smiled and I watched the cops search for me. I watched as they told my parents I wasn't found. I felt hatred towards the angel. Before I knew it her wings had healed. To this day I remember that aweful Black color. I now live with my friend in a graden of black roses with many other children that suffered the same fate. Who fell into the fallen angel's deadly trap. So the question remains are we dead or not?
- by Firey flower |
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- | Submitted on 12/10/2009 |
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- Title: the night she died
- Artist: Firey flower
- Description: This is suppoe to make you think. so have fun and plz give me feedback.
- Date: 12/10/2009
- Tags: night died
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Lady Deana - 05/16/2010
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you're waiting... you havent died, but you're getting there... slowly fading away, waiting for your chance to live again... if you were dead your wings would be ripped and tattered too. The angel had just suffered the same fate, but had a chance to live. What woulde you have done?
5/5 cuz that was good and really made me think. only bad thing was spelling & grammar & puntuation. - Report As Spam
- maddy1314 - 12/16/2009
- you are alive in a mystic world
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