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tick-tock.
Ugh, time goes by so slow. I swear this clock is broken! Allison thought, This school is so CHEAP!!
tick-tock.
The biology teacher kept doning on. Allison began to doodle in her textbook. She drew a queen dancing on a cloud of hearts, and a strange man with a tall green hat.
Colors began flooding into the imge allong with more more figures. Trees, a strped purple cat, roses of white a red, a black rabbit and very peculeor soldiers that resembled a deck of cards marching around the queen.
Puzzled by the display, Allison prodded at the heavy volume.
Thats odd, she thought. As if coated if rubber cement her finger would not lift from the book. Moments later, her entire hand had sunken into the book. As the simkimg increased more and more rapidly, she became more and more alarmed.
Once most of her body had been cosumed, she yelped for help. No one turned and looked or even seemed to hear her and the teacher continued the lecture.
She then fell entirely into the book. And falling, and falling. It was like a colorful abyss. Allisn began nearing the bottom and her doodle stated swirling to life around her.
Where am I? she thougt.
"Why, you're in Wonderland."
"Who's there!?!?" Allison shouted.
"I am a hatter, and you are Alice." the voice replied.
"No," Allison said, "I'm Allison."
"You," the mad hatter started, "Are Alice."
"Allison."
"No, just Alice."
"Ahh!! Fine I'll be Alice."
"Thats very nice," the hatter said, astonished, "It's time for tea." he said suddenly.
- by Epileptic Juicebox |
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- | Submitted on 11/14/2009 |
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- Title: Alice in Wondeland REDO chap 1
- Artist: Epileptic Juicebox
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Description:
umm im doing a darker more modern remix of alice in wonderland.
im going to start with her encouter with the mad hatter. my alice is like alice from twilight but a bit more lolita and way taller. - Date: 11/14/2009
- Tags: alice wondeland redo chapter1 dark
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Epileptic Juicebox - 11/22/2009
- ill post asap!
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- the daft koneko - 11/18/2009
- i likes it!!!! where's the rest?!?! and i want tea now!!!!!!!!!! >.<
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- Epileptic Juicebox - 11/15/2009
- thnx!
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- Stalked by Eve - 11/14/2009
- I think you're off to a great start. I'm not very good with advice. I just started writing myself. But I think it's great so far! biggrin
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