- So there's this story. It's about this girl I once knew... she was beautiful, smart, intelligent, funny, creative, brilliant, and bold. She was the greatest person I have ever known... she was so humble, loving and kind.. everyone loved her.she lived in a small town she had gorgeous long carmel-colored hair, and she lived the perfect life. straight a student, and of course all the guys loved her. She did have a boyfriend, and all of the guys just despised him because she chose him, and not anyone else. but one day, something tragic happened. she was walking along one day, and out of the blue she heard this voice. it was a sinister voice, not welcoming at all. it said, "i see hoe things are. you deserve better and you know it. come live with me and all your troubles will drift away. you will live life without a care." She thought for second, and she thought about how perfect her life was,. she strived for something more...some adventure. right now, this idea was sounding pretty good to her. she said sure. as soon as she did, she suddenly felt herself changing. she felt her lovingness fade away, and her beauty started to fade. she felt herself turning colder, from the inside out. she didnt know what was happening, and she wanted it to stop. she yelled and screamed for help, but no one couold hear her. no one heard her cry out for help as her last ounce of innocence slip away from her. then everything went blank. several days later she woke up in her home, everything seemed just perfect, just how it always was. she had no reccolection of the incident. she got dressed and headed out to school. she saw her best friend myra, and she called out to her. myra didn't answer. she called again and finally caught up to her. she found she was crying. why what happened are you ok she said. she continued her soft sobbibg. Oh Evangaline! I miss you so much. why oh why did it have to be you that the drunk person decided to murder???
- by Valkyrie_Kain32 |
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- | Submitted on 10/29/2009 |
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- Title: The Tradjedy of Evangeline
- Artist: Valkyrie_Kain32
- Description: just some stuff i came up with. i still have to proofread and grammar chack so dont freak at how incorrect some things are:)
- Date: 10/29/2009
- Tags: tradjedy evangeline
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- Surr3al - 07/25/2010
- Nice little story. I like the Ending as it was a sudden explanation for everything. 3/5
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