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"Klo?"
Klo looked up from her book to see Xneon. (It was a weird name but all the girls still liked him.) He had a shy grin. He wore his dark hat, as always, his yellow and black jacket, and his really, really tight jeans. (Klo always thought that he was probably gay, turns out, he wasn't when he revealed that he was in love with her friend.)
"What's up?" he asked.
Klo just shrugged. Not knowing what to say.
She's so beautiful, he thought. He asked, "Wanna walk 'The Track'?"
She looked at "The Track" uneasily. "The Track" was something you walked on with a boy/girl if you liked them.
But she wasn't ready to like anyone sometime soon....
"Sorry," she said, "maybe some other time."
Xneon felt disappointed, but he tried again, "Can we sit near the baseball field?" She nodded as an answer and followed him to the metal trunk. They sat down and Xneon started the conversation. Klo felt that there wasn't much to talk about but she opened up eventually. She talked about things like "One time at a party..." "At the park..." and "I remember on my 4th birthday..." But, mostly everything reminded her of Marts.
Although that day wasn't so special, Klo thought it was the happiest day of her life. He made her laugh, they spent time together, they always laughed at the same thing, they always passed notes in class, and they always felt like nothing in the world mattered. But he he liked her more than "just friends", and she just thought of him as "A friend". Everytime someone asked Klo if they were BF/GF, she said, "No, he's just my friend." But Xneon answered, "Nunia-Buizwax."
He had said they were B.F.F.E's (Best Friends For Eternity.) Klo wanted it to be that way. But she was losing her old friends because they liked him and they were jealous. And she didn't know if she cared. Until he broke the news to her.
"Klo, I'm moving to D.C. for 3-4 weeks."
Once again, Klo felt broken to pieces.
-Goodbye.
Be here for "The Fight". I don't guarantee you that it will be up soon, but I promise you it will be up. You know how your guardians can be.
Thank you all for reading, I love you all.
- by Music_N_Me |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/24/2009 |
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- Title: Remember The Time, Ch. 2.
- Artist: Music_N_Me
- Description: Ch. 2, "B.F.F.E." is about Klo meeting a boy, his name is Xneon. He starts to like her, but Klo likes him as a friend. Time goes by, they are best friends, friends are jealous, And everyone is curious. Everything seems fine, until news catches up with them.
- Date: 10/24/2009
- Tags: remember time
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Comments (1 Comments)
- prettybluedresses - 01/03/2010
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The absurdity of the names distracts from the story, which is overall a very relatable one (once again, this is hard to notice because of the names). Big, flashy names aren't always the key to an interesting story. Sarah and Tom are more relatable than Klo and Xneon, you know?
Aside from an oddly worded sentence here and there, very nice. - Report As Spam