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Down the stone street, you could hear his footsteps. He was running, but not to me. No, he was running away from me. Love it is such a foolish thing, to love someone so much but to have them not return that feeling. It is forever heart breaking.
“I’ll wait here for your answer.”
That is what I had said after I confessed my love to him. Now on this park bench I sit every day waiting for him to come and say that he loves me too. I am not naïve but perhaps I am foolish. From morning to evening I wait and he never comes, yet I still wait. I hear foot steps, they sound like his. I feel a hand on my shoulder, strong yet gentle like his hand. My heart starts to beat faster.
“He isn’t coming, stop waiting.”
I stand and turn to look, who said this. There was no one there, the park was empty. My heart sinks, no one was there. How I would love to stop waiting but I can’t. I gave my heart to him and until he returns it or completely shatters it. I can’t leave, not yet.
- by Dark_Gale017 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 09/30/2009 |
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- Title: No Longer (Re-written)
- Artist: Dark_Gale017
- Description: Okay I have to admit that the ending to No Longer was a bit of a cop out. At the end of it I lost the feeling. I think this one is better but you will have to let me know.
- Date: 09/30/2009
- Tags: longer rewritten
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Sweet Clara01 - 01/05/2010
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This ending is definatly better smile
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- moon on earth - 10/02/2009
- wow awsome...
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