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December 1st, 1999 , a boy was found on the ground , lifeless , no pulse . The Masked Man did it . August 14th , 2002 , a women and her husband were found on the ground , lifeless . The Masked Man did it . October 29th , 2005 , a man won the lottery , the same night , he was found on the ground of his house , lifeless . The Masked Man did it . May 9th , 2007 , a girl was found on the ground in an old abandoned warehouse , lifeless . The Masked Man did it . There is a story behind the murders . They all met The Masked Man . That was the begining , of their end . Janurary 7th , 2010 , five teens went into an old abandoned warehouse . They never came out . Police investigate , and go in the warehouse . They never came back . My name is Randy Techko . This is my story .
Janurary 5th , 2010 : It was cold and windy day in Burlington , New Jersey . A day , which started out the same . I got up , ate breakfast , took a shower and brushed my teeth , got my clothes on , I got to school , and when im done , I hang out with my best freinds , Fola , Tiara , Jeff , Justin , and Aj . Im a tall , skinny person , with black eyes , and brown hair . I HATE school , im not good at it neither . The clouds in the sky looked onimous , with a light black color , you could tell , that any minute , it would pour . After abother boring and tasteless day of 10th grade , I was on my way to Jeff's house , when Aj and Jeff came runing up to me , full speed , as if someone was out to get them . They stopped right in front of me , and started panting like a dog . I was about to ask what happened , when Aj spoke up .
"It's Fola." Aj said , still panting uncontrolably . "Hes dead." Jeff finished for him . I felt a onimous chill go down my spine . My legs felt stiff , I couldnt breathe , and I was trembling .
"Wha - what happened?" I finaly spit the words out of my mouth . Jeff stopped panting , and looked at me seriously .
"He was found on the ground in his house , lifeless , no pulse ." Jeff said with a serious expression . I felt sick . I knew they werent joking , my freinds wouldnt joke like that . It started to drizzle .
"Cmon , lets go to my house , before it starts to rain hard ." Jeff said trying to cheer up over the bad news . We ran to Jeff's house . Jeff is a little taller than me , he is realy athletic , he has dirty blonde hair , and bright blue eyes . Hes realy smart , hes skinny , and he has been my freind for a long time . Aj is super skinny , he has a loud voice that sounds like a girl . He is the smartest of my freinds , and he has the same hair and eye color , brown . We entered Jeff's house , threw our bookbags and binders on the bean bags , and sat down on the sofa . Jeff has a huge house , his parents are rich , they are both doctors . When you walk in , there is a living room , to the left is the kitchen , and there are long hallways , that connect to rooms like their bedroom , and a game room , and so on. Jeff grabbed the remote , and put on boxing . I still was realy upset about what happened to Fola . I thought boxing would help me get my mind off of it .
"Yo , ill go get some snacks , and ill sodas , ill be back ." Jeff said as he ran into the kitchen , and opened the refridgator . The door bell rang . It was a loud pinging sound , kinda like when your playing the triangle .
"Yo , Aj , can you get that ? Im kinda busy ." Jeff said , piling snacks on a plate . Aj groaned .
"Yea , yea ,yea." Aj mumbled as e got up , and headed for the door . The door bell rang again . Aj opened the door , and standing outside was Tiara , soked with rain .
"It took you long enough." Tiara said straightening her shirt .
"He he , sorry , I was kinda busy ." Jeff said smiling , as he came into the living room with a pile of snacks and sodas .
"Alirght , food!" I said happily as Jeff put the plate down on top of the table in front of the tv , and sat down . Tiara came inside , sat next to me , looked at what we were watching , moaned , pulled out her Ipod and starting listening to Likin Park . Tiara is skinny , she has short black hair , brown eyes , and a cute smlie . Shes always listing to her Ipod , she loves the color red , and she is very clever at math . It thundered , and I could hear the rain pounding against the roof .
"Yo , why isnt your parents home yet , Jeff?" Aj asked curiously . Jeff smiled , and laid back in the sofa .
"There gone for two whole weeks , preety sweet , right?" Jeff said high fiving me and Aj .
"Awesome." I said happily . It thundered real loud . Tiara turned off her Ipod , and started to speak .
"You know that old abandoned warehouse down the street?" She said with a smile on her face .
"Umm , yeah ." Aj answered . "Why?" I finished for him . Jeff's smile faded , and looked at Tiara seriously .
" 'Cuz i wanted to know if we you guys wanted to go in , and explore it ." Tiara said smiling .
"Um , sure." I said . Jeff grabbed Tiara , and started shaking her hard .
"Why do you want to do that you idiot! You wanna get yourself killed?" Jeff yelled at Tiara . Me and Aj watched in shock . Tiara slapped Jeff and threw him to the ground . Did I mention how strong she was?
"Whats your problem ? It was just a frikin question!" She yelled at Jeff angrily . Jeff got up in shock , and sat back down . Me , Aj , and Tiara were confused .
To Be Continued .................................
- by vdog xtreme |
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- | Submitted on 09/19/2009 |
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- Title: The Masked Man
- Artist: vdog xtreme
- Description: eh , i no this probably isnt tht good , but its gotta b better than my others i made , so y not try it?
- Date: 09/19/2009
- Tags: masked
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Comments (2 Comments)
- BigMouth12349 - 09/19/2009
- I'm intrested to see where his is going... I hope you continue it.
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- L 4 D Y J 0 K 3 R - 09/19/2009
- its good biggrin i luvs it biggrin lolz
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