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Prologue
“My love, hurry, quickly!”
“But what if they see me?”
“They wont, now come on!”
As she ran across to her lover, an U.S. soldier happened to walk by from their location. Across the sky was a loud sound of near by gun fire.
“No! Haru!”
As she fell, the thought of suicide was now set place in his life, but the sadness turn into rage, that took over his heart. With in a flash the boy attacked the soldier and tried to disarm him from his weapon, but with in an instant a seconded sound of gun fire was heard. As the boy step back the soldier fell to his knees. With his hand on his neck, the soldier fell and laid there in agony. The boy turned and ran to aid his lover, but the second he took two steps, a third sound of gun fire.
“Fu-ck” as he stoped and fell to the floor
As the boy fell, he saw his life flashed before him, but didn’t stop him to reach his lover. befor he looked to see were he was hit,he felt a cols sesation in his shirt. Once he looked, he saw that he was struck in the chest. His thoughts was the next after life.
When he reached his lover, he notices that she had the same wound as him.
“My love… it looks like it’s the end. " he said with a cough
“At lest we die together." as she turnd to face him and cried
With their last kiss they laid next to each other, all they can do is whisper ‘I Love You’. But with their final breath, they both told each other: “See you in the next life.”
As their vision got fuzzy and as they felt lifted from the love they shared, a cry of 'wake up' was heard in the distance. But for that strange reason it got louder and louder. Until…
“Hun, wake up...wake up!”..........
- by Rayven Mondo Bernal |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/10/2009 |
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- Title: the nightmarish past
- Artist: Rayven Mondo Bernal
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Description:
its based off my dreams and my memories and i what to see what all you gaians think.
also i am doing a novel on this so ill be on a look out on books if anyone stole my prologe.
for the record i have read and remember every book in and out so im not a fool.
also there will more to this but i have to leave it out for 1 reason
2. i would like to be an auther one day.
so plz dont be shy, just tell me what you think and your rating in the comment. bye - Date: 08/10/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- xHellaxYaxImxCutex - 01/29/2010
- Wow, the words need to be properly written, but that doesn't stop the story from being TOTALLY FRIKEN AWESOME!!!!*5stars*
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- xXRainbow_PixieXx - 08/10/2009
- wow, very dramatic!! I like it!! Just revise and edit and it'll be perfect!!^^
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