Alone

• Artist: the ghost of u mcr
• Description: this is a poem i started at least a year ago. i was reading twilight and i got to the part with the meadow and thought "what if i wrote a poem about the guy not being there?" so i wrote the first 4 lines and then just gave up. I resently remembered it and wrote more to it. this is what i got.
• Date: 08/10/2009
• Tags: alone poem

I sit alone in a forest
thinking "Were the hell is he?"
Then I realize,
he is not coming
I sit and cry my heart out
"Why didn't he come?!"
I cry
then a guy comes
asking whats wrong
I see into his eyes
"You are finally here"
I shreak happily
He wants me to come close
then he grabs me
and kisses me
then i awake
it was only a dream
i realize sadly
why wasn't it real?

Comments

[Master koss]

i do agree it gives a sense of loneliness and asks that universal question "is there anyone out there that is perfect for me?" needless to say 5/5

[Aceris]

That's sad, hope you find someone who is wonderful.

[Just_another_Ojama]

is this a poem?