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Tears come unwillingly.
I feel a shudder-- a cringe--
when your cold affection tries to
apologize to me.
Apology not accepted.
Don't put your clammy hand on mine,
or I might cry again.
I might let my true feelings show.
Anger comes over me.
Salty tears taste so good on this honesty.
My hands shake;
my lips quiver--
don't touch me.
Don't try to comfort me.
I'll only pull away.
I might punch that fake smile you passed on to me,
to show you what pain really is.
And I hope it aches your heart at two in the morning.
I hope it dries your throat to illness
and worries your mind to madness.
And I truly hope you admit it
when we have this same old talk again.
- by Nightnaiad |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/29/2009 |
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- Title: This Hatred Feels So Good
- Artist: Nightnaiad
- Description: Salty tears taste so good on this honesty.
- Date: 07/29/2009
- Tags: hatred feels good
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Comments (5 Comments)
- xXxShikabaneHimexXx - 01/03/2010
- this is beautiful. i love it.
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- I AM SNAP CRACKLE POP - 12/28/2009
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i think it is true to people and, not to mention, very inspiring
i wish i could write as beautifully as you did here! - Report As Spam
- avialaePrincess - 08/20/2009
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this is brilliant, and i agree with the guy below me. it sounds like it happened to you
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- Vespasian - 08/06/2009
- Seems centered on personal experience, which is the best kind of writing in my opinion. Good job
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