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Made by her the one woman i never care for. She thought she could control me she thought i would bow to her feet and to her wish but yet she doesn't see it... I belong to are goddess and to her way. However i am unlike her i will use my fist my rage my hate and my anger to fix any mess. My power are be on what she thought of me and she try to kill me. That b***h fail to do that and for the past hundreds of years i have wait wait for the moment to get back at her. My life is never going to end not even when hers end. I hold the power to kill the others that are just like me but are willing to fallow her. Neferet my old and now hate friend. Time is slowly coming to an end for you... and ill make sure that my blade will end it. I have watch and plan even do I know my goddess would wish for me to do other wise to try to save such a witch soul is something that no one can do... she is going to wipe us all out if we do not take care of her. Now i move not hiding what i am not worry for what i have become. I am a doll the first and not the last. The b***h should have left me dead but my power made her go for my soul should never trusted her i knew she was up to nothing good but i chose to look away and now look what she has done to me she has taken me form the spirit world were i was finely finding peace and stuck me in a body that neither feels pain or ages. I am the forgotten doll... and i like it. By the time this would all come to an end i would have found my power my inner strength that might be able to save my soul. Now the sands of my hour glass falls and there is nothing i can do to stop it... do i want to stop it... is this path i walk going to end everything... only time knows but... who gives a ******** when your trying to kill someone.
Chapter 1 Doll
"Come on dear... its time for you to wake up... after all this is your second chance." A dark voice echo over my ear as my eyes slowly open to see a dark room with blood marks all over the wall. "Uh... Whats going on?" I said as i move my hand to my head. A small laugh once again echo this time all over the room. "You are finely up my dear friend. Sorry it took me so long to get the body together and even longer to find your soul after all it would seem the Goddess was doing all she could to hide you." My eyes widen up as i notices who this dark voice belong to. "Neferet..." I said in a low voice as i stood up and looked down at my body. Just like one of those wired Dolls i had joints and wired legs i couldn't even begin to imagine what this body was made up or how i end up in here. "Yes my dear old friend. Aren't you glad to hear form me?" I quickly turn around to see her standing by a door with a large smile. I couldn't see much this room was dark and thanks to the door she was standing next to was open letting in bright light made it hard to see her but i could tell it was her. Neferet the one person i called friend but never like for some reason. I just node my head as stood up i felt something hit the back of my knee. As i move my hand i felt hair. I pull it up to see it was white hair and it was long very long it reach my knees. "What have you done Neferet... why have you done this you broken one of the most secret rules we had. You brought me back... WHY!!?" I yelled at her but my yell was quickly drown out by laughter as Neferet just nodded her head. "Because I don't go by those rules dear... i don't go by any of them." She said with the same smile this time showing her white teeth. I close my hand into a fist and just thought what to do. I was strongly to my Goddess wish after all she was some one i fought and die for. Neferet turn around and slightly looked at me. "You are now my... you will fallow my rules and my orders Kesi you are now under my control." She said with another small giggle as she close the room.
Now in darkness i lay on the ground thinking what to do. My mind quickly rush throw the thoughts of what was going on. How could this have happen to me. As i close my eyes i heard a voice echo right next to me. "My dear child... don't give in... don't give up... i will always be right next to you. May the Darkness Shield you for its truly the last place we have." That voice it was her. It was Rukia. "I wont... i wont give up." I said in a low tone as i stood up. I thought for a while hoping that i had also my powers if so then i would be able to fight and win against Neferet. As I had my eyes close everything around me slowly came to a stop. I just slightly smile as in the air i found what i want what i need. "To ash to ash the world is falling down." I said in a low voice as i said this all the small dust in the air explode blowing half of the building i was in up. I received no damaged after all exceptions were something that couldn't harm me. As I open my eyes to see the lovely night sky shining down at me. "Moon... wait... just wait ill insure to stop it." I said in a low tone of voice as i looked around to see a figure standing on top of a tree with a smile. "Aw... so your powers are the same. Now Kesi lets stop this before one of us die." Neferet said with the same smile. I just laugh a little. "Neferet you might be able to control souls and place them in anything you like. But you forgot who your dealing with. I am not going to do what you want I'm not going to give in. You fail to see that I still hold strong in are Goddess way not your ******** up ways." Neferet just laugh as she slowly started to fade away. "My ways are not ******** up. Kesi you should know that the Goddess ways are failing to achieve anything. Are lifes are as s**t as before. Its about time we show the humans what we can do. Its time to put the trash in its proper place." I just smirk as i listen to her. "Well you have your way and i have my own and that is to the goddess and that's finely." I said as i took off it felt wired to be running in this body. This body was just like my old one but yet... not it fully. Neferet just laugh as she move her hand up as that happen i saw blood all around the tree she was standing form into spikes. "Well it seems i have no more time to play with you. I have found the way to achieve my goals of bring the dead back. Now to find someone that holds the same views. Until then Kesi take care of your self... it would be a shame to find you dead in the force now would it." Neferet said with a smile as she fade away into the night sky. I just nodded my head as i looked at the tree and the spikes. "Stupid ******** idiot is going to mess everything... Goddess were are you." i said all this in a low voice as i turn around. I just lower my head as i thought what to do. I could go to the Black and White ops teams but most likely they wouldn't believe me and look at me for i wasnt even vampire nor human. I just sigh as i sat against a tree and looked at the moon once more. I felt something it was wet and it was coming form my eyes. It was a tear i was crying but yet i didnt feel it. As i wipe away the tears i thought this was just the start. Neferet would pay for what she did.
As i thought of this i finely stood up and looked down at my body. Yes i was nothing but joints and body parts. I was truly nothing but a doll with a soul trap inside it. I looked around in what was left of the building to see if I could find cloths of any. Luck would have it i found something. Surly or not Neferet had left this for me because it was out in the open. It was a white Kimodo dress which would cover thankfully half of my body but not my arms. Getting into the Kimodo dress wasnt hard but when i picked it up i saw matching stockings and gloves. Neferet had really plan this all out. I just sigh for now this is all i had and it was going to need to last me for a while if i was going to achieve anything. I had to find Rukia and tell her what had happen and warn her about Neferet goals and newly found power. As i slowly put on the stockings my mind kept thinking of what was going to happen to me if the white ops found me. They would most likely try to kill me due to what i was. With this in my mind i couldn't allow that to happen i need to warn Rukia and the others of what was to come. When i came finley snap back into reality i was fully dress. Everything fit me like a glove after all Neferet most likely made this to fit me. I walked around for a while getting use to the feeling of this dress and as i did i found some wooden sandals. I knew i was going to need shoes at less for were the hell i was stuck in the forest until i remember how to open the ******** portal i was going to be doing a lot of walking. As i walked around what was left of the building i found papers that had wired writings and some of Neferets notes on it. I just couldn't help but wounder what the hell she was doing and why she had so many different marks along side notes. Then it hit me Neferet was working on the way of bring the soul back and this was how she did all the marks in the room must have been these. I just sigh as i turn around. "******** b***h couldn't just leave the dead in peace could she." I said in a low voice as i walked out of the reminders(sp) and turn to look at them. I just nodded my head. "To ash to ash the world is falling down." I said as the rest of the building blow up sending a large smoke ball into the air which quickly marge into the night sky. "Time to get moving." I said as i took off running on the forest floor wasnt so safe as i thought due to how fast i was moving i only had a couple of seconds to avoid hitting a tree rock or a root sticking out of the ground. However my goal was the thing now keeping me going. Kill Neferet and insure nothing like this would happen to anyone.
- by Darkness Lin |
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- | Submitted on 07/26/2009 |
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- Title: The Start of Darkness
- Artist: Darkness Lin
- Description: The first Chapter of a new story i started to work on. I haven't done much with it and yet to prof-read so if there is anything i can fix do tell me. Also leave comments and all i dont mind its just need help with the story and all. Well i hope you enjoy the story.
- Date: 07/26/2009
- Tags: start darkness vampires
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- SinginginyourShower - 08/08/2009
- um, I'm trying to read this but there are some things that need to be seriously checked before I can continue. Whenever you're writing anything you've got to use paragraphs. At least make a new para when someone else speaks. You're not using any commas. For example, "However i am unlike her i will use my fist my rage my hate and my anger to fix any mess." You've made a list, so commas should be: "However unlike her I will use my fist, my rage, my hate, and my anger to fix any mess." And cap I's.
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