- I rememeber a dream.. Blood... Fire.. And raine that burned the very flesh on my body... Eye site soo blurry... I rememeber Watching my mother burn... as he slashed her body... Blood Falling From the sky!.. Im crying... Crying tears of pain.. I know and Feel the pain my mother feels... I beg the Man to stop.. "your hurting her! stop it please!" He didnt stop.. So I started Hitting him in the leggs.. I was too Small to Even Reach His Chest.. My mother Was screaming as twas I... I couldn't stop the pain.. I felt as if my own body twas as well burning.. The man whipped her.. As he whipped her one last time the blood off her dead lifeless body hit me across the face.. And as i turned torward my dead mother I Saw A Faint Figure. She Looked At me and without moving her lips she said.. "Be safe my Darling Baby girl.. I will Be here for you.. You will Know when to call.." And like that she was gone like a star. I screamed as i Felt the last presence of my dearly beloed mother slip away... I run and start grabbing my mothers body.. Trying desperately to save her.. and i fall to my knees and cry.. Just then The dark man leaned down and picked me up off the ground ... I get a good look at my mothers merciless killer to realize he was my own father... I cried and screamed.. trying to escape for fear he might do to me what he did to her.. He layed me in My bed and said.. "im sorry dear child but your mother was of evil.. She must die to save her soul.." From then on I never questioned him or his logic all I knew.. Is that i Felt her Presence Inside me around me And all about me.. and every moon that passed I Aged and became more and more like her... In more and more ways... My father Could see it In my eyes.. That same look of desire... The look in her eys when she transformed.. Into A witch.. The said daughter of satan.... the only thing that was different was that i could not touch iron.. or anything metal without it shocking me.. Every day the shocks grew worse... So my father dearest sent me away to a little village outside my home town.. He called it His homestead.. To wear i Would Learn the old ways... He thought maybe if i learn the way of god... I might not be like my mother.. a child borne of satan.. but it was too late.. I already started my Transformation into witchly hood.. it couldn't be stopped... And he didn't have the heart to do to me what he did to my dear beloved mother... I was 13 When he sent me away to live with my brother.. Brother Burken.... Were the 3 yrs of hell began.. to where i am now.. all alone on my own.. in a hell whole known as a freak show... Im the main attraction in a circus that travels russia... The girl Whose eyes turn to fury.. The gurl Who was Borne Of satan.. The Gurl who could you for everything your are.. The gurl now kown as Vain "the Witch of Hell! Satans Personal Assasin..."
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- | Submitted on 07/22/2009 |
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- Title: MY beginning
- Artist: AbbiAdventurous
- Description: This is the begining p=of a story i am writting.. Hope yu like it.
- Date: 07/22/2009
- Tags: beginning hell sadness
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Luffypirate - 07/24/2009
- Well, for a beginning, it's pretty good, I guess. However, you really need to work on the basics. If you're going to write seriously, spell correctly and use the right forms of words. Also, what's with the random capitalization of random words?
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- Just_another_Ojama - 07/24/2009
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WOw
That's just dark.the tone is perfect
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