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it started out as any normal day. Trey Phantom was in the Ghost Zone (his home) and was traning when this big giant planet apered out of no where, so clock work told him to check it out. Meanwhile on another planet there was this guy named Spiker. Now he was part of a secret group on that planet that was soooooo secret no one else knew bout is so the same planet appered and his leader of the group told him to check it out so he did. The two met on the planet and thought the other one was there to take it over so they had a battle till this GIANT castle appers out of no where, and as soon as it did clockwork called Trey back to the gzone and was told to take Spiker w him. So they go and Clockwork tells Trey to go into the forbeden room in the castle. So Trey does and he sees this armor set in the midevil times but is like so shiny it looks new. Now this armor was called The Reality Armor which was created from this indistructable metal called reality metal. so he puts it on. oh by the way the castel belonged to the most powerful being in the world, The Evil One dun dun dunnnn. anyway, Trey and Spiker go and gather there army. They get to the planet and Trey and Spiker Fight The Evil One (and win of coarse) and well its all over.
- by Pepper Celestine |
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- | Submitted on 07/21/2009 |
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- Title: Trey Phantom and Spiker
- Artist: Pepper Celestine
- Description: The stories and Chronicals of two unlikely heroes
- Date: 07/21/2009
- Tags: trey phantom spiker
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Comments (5 Comments)
- becca1597 - 05/20/2010
- eh im walking aaway now sorry now
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- MaryJeanStar - 07/27/2009
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I agree with all three comments beneath mine.
Fix up your grammar, spelling, make it a bit more dramatic, and I can definitely see this on the back of some cheesy B movie DVD case you get in the mail, for seven Kellogg's Cornflakes Coupons. - Report As Spam
- Just_another_Ojama - 07/27/2009
- this looks like a bad review gone wrong.u got potential dude fix ur grammar
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- Prince Husky - 07/23/2009
- shut up stupid c**t lets see you write one.
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- Chrysolas - 07/21/2009
- That.... that's an embarrassment to literature... The grammar, the plot... I think I just went blind....
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