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I felt a hand on my back and went to attack the owner when a voice in my head told me to stop. Just as my fist would've made contact with Natalia's face I pulled out of the fury. Natalia had winced and had her eyes closed in preparation for a blow that would never come. She peeked and saw my fist not even an inch from her face. She breathed a sigh of relief. I stared in dumb shock, not being able to move. I'd almost hit my best friend. No matter all the times she hit me, I would never do the same to her. I had to keep some form of control over myself.
There was a grunt from underneath me. I looked down in surprise to see Milita's face bloodied and bruises taking shape. She would never forgive me for marking her precious face.
“You can get off me now! You proved your damn point,” Milita snapped.
“I was enjoying my victory,” I laughed. I got up and left her on the ground. Little princess would get up when she felt she had to. I ignored her and turned to Natalia.
“I'm sorry. Did I hurt you,” I asked with concern. She smiled at me, reminding of a small child who was afraid of a punishment.
“No, I'm fine. But you have to keep your temper under control,” she scolded. I laughed before I heard someone clear their throat. I turned and stopped cold in my tracks. It was the high priestess. I squeezed my eyes shut, waiting for anything negative to happen, but nothing came. I chanced a look to see the high priestess shaking her head with a small chuckle. I grinned sheepishly.
The high priestess had always liked me and my trouble making nature. She's the only reason I was welcomed back into the graces of the others. Not many other people know her name is Saris. Saris had given me everything I have, my place with the others, and allowed me my differences with a motherly grace. She often expected that I would be the one to take her place when it was necessary. Little did she know that I wanted no part of it.
“Was this fight truly necessary? I swear, you are the most troublesome child among us,” Saris laughed. Ouch! It always hurt when she called me a child. Well, I would have to get over that. I pouted, letting my lower lip tremble.
“Was it necessary to call me a child,” I asked in a quivery childish voice.
“My goodness! How can you ask that and play this little game,” she asked with a forced frown. I could tell she was fighting another smile. She didn’t want an argument from the others about her leniency for me. I stifled my own laugh as she tried to mimic my pout.
“Shall we commence into the temple? He shant wait for eternity,” Saris recommended. We were already late for the meeting of offering to him. He wouldn’t be too happy we were late, but he would be forgiven. In fact, we were supposed to practice abstinence for him. But of course, I’m not the waiting around type of girl. Not to say I wasn’t a maiden and all that, but Devian was a little crabby.
Okay, Devian was way crabby, but what could I say about it? I was his priestess, here to please him in any way I could. He was arrogant and self-centered and often presumed overmuch of me, but I had to admit, he had his looks. Those have to be his only redeeming quality! His blonde wavy hair flowed just at his chin. His green eyes reflected his arrogance, but revealed a kindness only I could see. I knew he could be compassionate, but not many others knew. He didn’t like many people to know his ability to care. He didn’t want people to use it against him. I shared his views of the world, but I never wanted to be committed to him.
“Hello,my lovelies,” he said with a clap. Oh yay.
- Title: The Shadow's Secrets, Part 2
- Artist: Aloriel
- Description: continuing the first part
- Date: 07/20/2009
- Tags: shadows secrets part
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Just_another_Ojama - 07/30/2009
- wonderful use of the first person pov.i need part one to get it.keep up the good work
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- Aloriel - 07/20/2009
- let me know what you think! yes this is the author
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