- Ella, the girl with a personality that would have any guy wrapped around her finger. She had such a good heart that it was a sad sight to see her fading away on the hospital bed in front of your eyes. She had contracted breast cancer, unfortunately it was caught to late. Ella had lived a happy life. She had died at the age of 17 leaving her parents heartbroken to say the least. Everyone felt remorse that someone so pure had been taken from the world so prematurely. Perhaps none felt as bad as her love, Antonio. They had been together for some time. They spent every chance that they could with each other. It was a truly sad moment to see such a beautiful couple torn apert by the cold hands of death. It had to happen sometime. Well, Ella did live happily even in death! She was one of the best angels up in heaven. God trusted her so. He had even given her the ability to look at the happenings on earth. Well that was a mistake he would not make again. For all the time that Ella had to herself was spent looking down upon Antonio. He had been sad the first few times Ella had observed him. But he had gotten over it. One day, while he was walking back from her grave he got a call from his boss. It was very important and required his full attention. He did have to cross the street. Antonio could not have been crossing at a more inopportune moment, for a bus was headed his way...Ella had to think fast. She could not have her true love die. She did the one thing all angels must not do, an act forbidden by God himself. She jumped down from Heaven spread her wings and plunged to the eath save her true love. She had gotten there with seconds to spare. She shoved Antonio out of the way. He stood up to look back at who had saved his life. When he saw Ella standing there his eyes widened and he fainted. Ella now stripped of her angelic form had rushed him to a hospital. She cried mercilessly upon finding out her attempts were futile. Poor Antonio had dies of a heart attack upon seeing Ella, who was supposed to be dead, Standing in the street. Ella rushed out of the hospital and fled as far as she could from the body of her dead lover. She could not show her face to anyone who knew her. She had to find a way to lay low until she could find her way back to heaven!
- Title: The Story of Ella!
- Artist: ecopper12
- Description: Okay, so this was a story I entered into a contest on Gaia a little bit ago and I wanted to see what you guy's thing of it!
- Date: 06/24/2009
- Tags: story ella
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Comments (3 Comments)
- colorful_fuse - 07/01/2009
- so sweet and so sad!
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- 1ngu0266 - 06/29/2009
- Its so sweet that it made my heart warm again. S2
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- x Peachy x girl x - 06/24/2009
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Awww that's so sweet, but sooo sad.
It's really good! 5/5
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