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what a tragic loss
four girls and two boys they were all teens
i don't know maybe sixteen through eighteen
but none the less their death awakened that quiet neighborhood
lights flashed blue,red,and white in my face
this strange figure came towards me
it was terribly ugly,but regarding his ugly face he was swift
to grab me,i laughed why was he taking me in
i did nothing wrong? i screamed hystericaly in his face i got rid of those beasts! i continued screaming into the night
as i was pulled into the beasts vehicle,i continued laughing,and thinking, yes
thinking very cunning and sinister thoughts,
march,march fifteenth,yes that was the date,
exactly at eleven i set my plan in motion,
yes i would finaly get to kill those six horrible beast in my quiet neighborhood,
they were horid creatures,they were about as ugly as that ghastly officer,
covered in dirty hair from head to toe,
they had thick meaty fingers,they smelled of hormones,cigarrets,drugs,and other disgusting scents,but the worst thing about them was that wild look in there eyes,absolutly horrible,
yes,yes thats why i killed them,
that look in there eyes like a vulcher staring it's prey down,
yes i got them and there vulcher eyes,those evil,evil eyes
i stood in my yard as bright lights and loud music blared coming from the
neighbor's yard,when i looked i saw all six of them,
all six of there vulcher eyes,i counted about twelve eyes all together,
and i knew tonight was the night i'd finaly rid myself of their stare,
my sweaty hand gripped that magnificent pistol,and in one
foul swoop i shot all the lights out in the nearby yard,
there terrified scream echoed through my ears, i couldn't take it any more,so then ever so quietly i snuck into their yard,
and with a cunning smile upon my face, i cocked that pistol,
and fired into the darkness,yet another horid scream filled my ears,
it was so loud and bothersome i lost my temper,and continued firing
into the dark abyss,all fell silent as i laughed loudly into the night,
but something was wrong,i heard something,a...a whimper,
the lights flew on and i found my self staring at a young teenage girl,
her head buried in her arms,she was shaking like crazy,
and i asked her "what's wrong?" but then she lifted her head,
and i once again felt the gaze of those vulcher eyes,
"please don't hurt me" i was furious she tricked me?!,getting me to let my guard down!,i grabbed my pocket knife
flipped it open and waved it by her face,"you tricked me!now die!"
and then i stabbed it into her left vulcher eye
the deed was done no blood lie on my hands,i carried them away,and hid them ever so cunningly two in my gun locker (behind my guns),one in my lawn mower's bag (a very tight fit),two more in my walls (which i quickly repaired), and that last one,with the one vulcher eye left,i found an old empty sewer,
and i drug her body deep down into it,i quickly washed away the blood,
and rid myself of all the evidence,it was perfect
i was posotive no one would figure it out,
about a week later,two officers came over to my house,
what horid creatures they were,but i reframed from killing them,
they questioned me very seriously,
i sat there a grin on my face,as i lied through my teeth,
but as they asked the third question there was a horrible ringing in my ear,
with every question it continued to get louder,and louder,such a terribly
deafening sound,i almost shouted if they had not been there,
when they asked their final question the ringing had become so loud,
i could not hear them speaking,i could barley hear myself thinking,
and then i relised it,it was the eyes the one vulcher eye left alive,
screaming loudly echoing through the sewers,i looked at the creatures in front of me,the seemed to not notice it,but it was so terrible how could they not?!,
i fell to the floor franricaly trying to cover my ears,
but the sound still echoed through my head,
louder,louder!,LOUDER!,i knew there was only one way to stop it,
i shot up and ran,yes i ran towards that old dried up sewer,
the screaming got louder as i came closer,until it reached it's peak
i stopped in front of the sewer,looking back i was posative i lost them,
i ran into the sewer and found it the source of the terrible sound,
i pulled the knife still wedged into it's left eye,
and quickly stabbed it's final right vulcher eye,
then silence,i cried out in joy and bliss,
but then as i looked back the to officers walked up to me and hand cuffed me,
and my screams of joy and anger echoed through the empty sewer
he pulled me out and set me down and i thought to my self
what a tragic loss
four girls and two boys they were all teens
i don't know maybe sixteen through eighteen
but none the less their death awakened my quiet neighborhood
- by ILikeBabyBarPoo |
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- Title: beasts
- Artist: ILikeBabyBarPoo
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Description:
what a tragic loss
four girls and two boys they were all teens
i don't know maybe sixteen through eighteen
but none the less their death awakened that quiet neighborhood
lights flashed blue,red,and white in my face
this strange figure came towards me
it was terribly ugly,but regarding his ugly face he was swift
to grab me,i laughed why was he taking me in
i did nothing wrong? i screamed hystericaly in his face i got rid of those beasts! i continued screaming - Date: 06/04/2009
- Tags: beasts death crazy physco
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Darkened_Fayt_Ality - 07/03/2009
- very good
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- heatdestroyer - 06/17/2009
- very good
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- Avilahh - 06/08/2009
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cool, hey,is this a series u made?if it is, is this the first one? you are a talented writer with cool ideas but if you made your puncuation and capitalization better than it would be even better
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- ILikeBabyBarPoo - 06/04/2009
- wow longer than i expected it to be
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