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The days I think they cant get any worse but they do how well I dont know but they do.Its not that you left with no goodbye or that you left at all its that you left a letter and this is what it said
Dear Baby,
By the time you read this I will be gone and you cry I know but dont am not worth it
I had to go I knew you were unhappy thats why i left i will be on a plane to New York.
I start training and in six months I will be in nom I love you I always will dont forget that.
Everytime you see the sun think of me and dont cry please I did not mean to hurt you.
Your Love Chris
I cry for the next week I did not want you to leave I want to stay with me and be save with me
but I will wait for you.
- by teeka_booo |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 05/16/2009 |
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- Title: no goodbye
- Artist: teeka_booo
- Description: no haters
- Date: 05/16/2009
- Tags: goodbye
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Comments (3 Comments)
- kuma - 09/29/2009
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Isn't saying no haters like...asking for haters? o.o
Punctuation helps. biggrin - Report As Spam
- Musra - 06/24/2009
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Commas are your friend.
Though it's format is more poem like...
Try turning it into that. - Report As Spam
- Xx Vampire RaWr xX - 05/19/2009
- I like the story only it didnt make much sense because your missing words and yeah.
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