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I remember yesterday when i fell asleep on a park bench. So can anyone tell me how today I'm engaged to one of the richest people in this land? I know I can't.
Well when i woke up this morning I saw him. His name is Marcus Dorantes. He has pitch black hair and blue almost white eyes that can see through lies. He was just standing there looking at me with Jonathan (his super hot brother).
I felt naked. Like they see right through me.
"Jonathan is she dead."
"No brother shes clearley alive her chest is rising and falling.If she was dead it wouldn't move at all."
"Who are you ?"I was so shocked to see them here, staring at me.
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"Excuse me my name is Jonathan Dorantes. This here is my brother Marcus Dontes heir to the Dontes fortune. Even though hes only a year older then me."
"How old are you?"
"I am fifteen years old. And my I ask what is your age?"
"I am going to be sixteen in five days or so."
"And my I ask what is your name."
"My name is Maria. Maria Vasquez."
"Well, Ms. Vasquez , would care to join me and my brother to brunch at our house." said Marcus this time instead of Jonathan.My rational mind said no but for some reason my mputh had to say:
"I'd love to."
I'll write more later I've got to go now.
- by Chocolate_craze1379 |
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- | Submitted on 05/14/2009 |
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- Title: Why me? T_T
- Artist: Chocolate_craze1379
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i just like to write
dont be too harsh - Date: 05/14/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Pilotslover - 05/17/2012
- Constructive you need to slow down a bit, your paragraphs should try to aim for about three sentences (It's world building) as this gives you time to explore concepts.
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- fufhff5 - 12/13/2010
- omg i love it it's a lttle like a porm ^-^ i love it ^-^ think you sould just keep the rast off the internet and try and get it tournd in to a book ^-^ i would love to read more ^_^ you a vary good witier ^_^ i hope i spelled that right lol ^-^ i so give it five stars ^_^ and i love your username to ^-^ but then again what girl would not like it ^-^
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- Z E T H I E K A - 05/18/2009
- Cool! keep writing
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- Lexi0927 - 05/15/2009
- Wow this sounds like a fairy tale let me know when you continue the story
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