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I was 16 when i met JORDAN in school.
Jordan was discriminated a lot from other students in class
and i was a new student that time...
he really is a quiet type of person
and he only hangs out with me.
no one knows how special he is
Until i discovered that he is good in making lots of different kinds of stories
and he promises me that he would make one for me.....
a month had passed, and he told me that i am the only friend that
he would only have and nothing more else...
i see the smile in his face, a smile that takes a lot of years to see
and he had given me a precious bracelet that his name was on it
he told me to keep it and wear it everyday so i could remember him
no matter what happens.....
as the same, i gave him an item with our names on it
it was a pendant necklace with our name inside....
after the happy times, he told me that his parents
were going to move in other country
but he said he wanted to stay with me.... he shook his head down
while we were sitting in our hangout place beside the old lake
with fogs in it...
Jordan can't change his parents mind so there is no
chance for him to stay....
he told me so clearly that "No matter what happens, i want to be your only friend"
while saying those words
his eyes were staring at me like his going to eat me
but then i throw it out of my mind
i started thinking of sending him letters....
so i decided to do it after he gave me his whole address
when i woke up in the morning, i heard the news that he is gone
but then i thought at first that he's gone with his family
when i heard the real news about him, i felt so many emotions
like, sadness, angry and disappointed....
that Jordan was shot by an unexpected person
that the person thought he was someone who his looking for
tears had been falling to my face, but then i also heard that
he has these last words coming out from his mouth
he says "I want to be your only friend" repeating over again until
there's no voice coming out from his mouth...
After a couple of months, while i was sleeping in my room
a cold feeling went on swaying through my skin...
and i heard a voice calling my name.... i ignored it
but the more i ignore it the more it gets louder and louder....
i screamed, and my mom walked into my room so fast
that she carried her gun.... she asked me what's wrong
and i told her that i heard a voice that keeps calling me
and my mom said, that is nobody in my room, and she tells me
to go to sleep, so i did....
in the morning, a girl introduced herself and made friends with me
her name is Melisa, she's nice and likes to talk about a lot of things...
she asked me where i love to hangout....
so i brought her there, in the foggy old lake.
she said that its creepy there so she decided to bring me in her big house...
so i went to her house...
when we were in her wide room, i then look in the big mirror...
but my eyes starts itching so i scratched it softly
and while i'm scratching it, after i opened my eyes
i saw in the mirror at the back of me.... a boy
and his familiar, so i look closely........ and had a shock
it was Jordan...
so when i looked back and into the mirror again
his gone, poof like a vanishing air.....
creeps are going on me.... i felt so cold....
so i went home and went to my bed....
i was having a dream like
i was attacking Melisa in her room....
it was a nightmare....
so i keep myself on waking but i can't
until the dream finishes by its own....
when i woke up that morning, a news just came by
and told me that Melisa was gone...
and i don't know why....
the news is about how Melisa died...
some people had found her lying in the foggy old lake
holding a kitchen knife on her right hand, a rope tied on her neck,
and all of her organs were out of her body, her eyes were no where
to find, and her blood was streaming in the old lake....
a note from the tree said: " I told you that i will be your only friend "
and i remember that Jordan told me those things before and after he died...
but when i made friends again, same things happened
so i decided not to make friends anymore
until i get old and die beside Jordan's grave.....
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- by vyletpeace |
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- | Submitted on 05/03/2009 |
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- Title: "ThE OnLy FriEnD YoU'LL hAvE"
- Artist: vyletpeace
- Description: friendship never ends....
- Date: 05/03/2009
- Tags: only friend youll have
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Mentalpatient1288 - 07/21/2009
- really good story but the grammar was a bit off so i got a bit confused at some bits. But a really good story, you should expand of it! smile
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- Will_zern44 - 05/11/2009
- That was really freaky (not reeeeallly freaky more surprising) and it was a really good story
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- Daft Moron - 05/04/2009
- dude i love the note on the tree! biggrin awesome different and interesting!
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- vyletpeace - 05/03/2009
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yah thats true...
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- KG-Jordan - 05/03/2009
- Oh The Scary Part Is When You Heard Name Calling In Your Room If You Know What a Spirit Is It Is a Ghost in ur room cause no offense there is alot of ghost in the PI ya Scary naman
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