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Chapter 1 (The Noises)
Once there were two girls named Dawn and Kumiko. They both live together as roommates, Kumoko has short hair that goes past her shoulders a bit, she aslo has black hair. Dawn has the same but her hair is dark red. Kumiko wears black pants with a black shirt and a trench and boots, Dawn wears a black shirt with blue jeans, a hoodie and chucks. Kumiko has brown eyes and Dawn has blue eyes. They both love rock music and play video games. They always have fun with each other, they are best friends but act like they are sisters, and they also love to goof off. This begins at their hose and as they play video games they begin to encounter things that they have never encountered before but they realize later that it will all be worth it at the end.
*Kumiko and Dawn both sitting down on a couch playing gears of war live*
Dawn: Dude! I freaking killed that damn guy!
Kumiko: Hell yeah! And about time too, he was pissing me off!
Dawn: Yeah no kidding.....Oh s**t watch it!
Kumiko: Dammit! Where did he come from!
Dawn: Don't know but let's kick his a** later, Let's play devil may cry 4 we have to finish it.
Kumiko: Fine by me *she puts her controller down*
Dawn: *she gets up and grabs the games and switches them, then sits back down and grabs the controller*
Kumiko: *she lays back and watches till Dawns missions is done for her to play*
*a noise is heard from the alley near their house*
Kumiko: *jumps a bit from the noise and looks around* Hey did you hear something just now?
Dawn: Yeah, here my turn is up *she hands her the controller* I'm gonna go check.
Kumiko: Ok *she grabs the controller and plays* Just be careful.
Dawn: Yeah I will, thanks *she opens the front door and goes outside while she closes it from behind*
Kumiko: *she finishes playing and turns it off, and watches some T.V* I wonder if Dawn found anything.
Dawn: *she looks around where the noise came from and sees nothing* hmm....must of been a cat or something. *she heads back into the house*
Kumiko: *watching T.V then sees Dawn enter* So, did you see or find anything?
Dawn: *she shakes her head* No, it was probably a cat or something. *she walks over to her and sits next to her*
Kumiko: Oh, yeah you could be right *she starts flipping through channels to see if there is anything to watch* So far looks like there's nothing to watch, there never is.
Dawn: *suddenly stops Kumiko* Wait! go back to the news! I saw something!
Kumiko: Ok *she flips it back*
Dawn: So there's a killer on the loose!?
Kumiko: *looks at Dawn with a scared look on her face* You don't think that the noise we heard was the killer!?
Dawn: *her eyes grow wide* I hope not!!!
*suddenly the lights go out and the noise they heard earlier was heard again*
*they both scream and go hide they stay close at all times and hide in the same spot so nothing can happen to each another*
Kumiko: Ok this is way to freaky. *she says with a shaky voice*
Dawn: Yeah.....I just hope we are safe here.
*a crash is heard in the living room where they use to be*
*they both gasp but they don't scream, so they won't draw attention to who's in the house*
Dawn: This is crazy who would want to kill us? I mean we didn't do a damn thing.
Kumiko: Yeah, I just Don't get it.
*they both suddenly get quiet when they hear the stranger come in and begins to scratch the wall near their hiding spot*
*they cover their ears from how loud the noise is*
Dawn: *then uncovers her ears a few minutes later noticing that the scratching is done, she looks at kumiko and motions to tell her that the noise is gone*
Kumiko: *uncovers her ears and whispers to Dawn* What was that?
Dawn: *whispers back* I don't know but it's gone.
*they both come out of their hiding spot and take a look around*
Dawn: well seems like whoever that was their gone.
Kumiko: Yeah, but look at this *she points at the wall*
Dawn: *she walks over to her* Whats up? *she looks and her eyes grow wide*
*they see huge slash marks across the wall from a sword*
Kumiko: Whoever it was they have a weapon!
Dawn: s**t dude! that's not cool!
Kumiko: Seriously! That's insane! Who carries a sword these days! I mean come on!
???: *Behind them leaning against the wall* ......That would be me....
*they both gasp and slowly turns to see who's behind them*
(Chapter 1 Ended) (Chapter 2)
(The Stranger)
- by DawnSparda |
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- | Submitted on 04/22/2009 |
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- Title: Mystic World Of Mystery Story
- Artist: DawnSparda
- Description: this is something i made up, its about 2 girls that have special powers but don't know it until they meet someone that helps them learn about their powers, then they train to defeat the evil enemy that wants to destroy the world, you might not understand it at first but it gets good and better the more you read, this is the first chapter, if you wanna read more feel free to ask i have 8 chapters done, there is strong language in it, careful
- Date: 04/22/2009
- Tags: mystic world mystery story
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Comments (5 Comments)
- DawnSparda - 04/22/2009
- glad you liked it, i know i need work on the word choice but hey its how i am i guess XD
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- Yumikii - 04/22/2009
- Umm you need a little work on your word choice but other than its good.
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- AnimeFan207 - 04/22/2009
- awesome story ^_^ i wanna read more 5/5
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- Rcho - 04/22/2009
- er wow sparda just a little bit of strong language but u r my friend 5/5
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- Sow It Up K i d - 04/22/2009
- this is really good ^^
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