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"Honey wake up" mom said. mom where are we going why is it so dark in the room i said in a soft voice.Just get up! we have to leave before thay get us. Wait who is going to get us just tell me please.ok its the masked men what there back i thought you said ... yes i did sally but i guess they where just lies to calm us down.Owell then lets go before they get us.c'mon over here in the under ground cabin will be safe in here.Are u sure mom.Yes i am.Then a gun shot was shot in the outside of the cabin. Mom! im scared shh stay quiet sally or else they will find us.Ok mom but what was that noise .I dont know ill go check. mom be carfull ok mom said .As sally was in the under ground cabin she hears her mom screaming saying leave me alone what do u want from me. where is your daughter tell me now the unmasked man said. Why do u want her. Just tell me where she is or ill shoot wait i she in that hole.No she is not.Then a shot from the gun was shot.sally began to cry. But it was her dad who shot an unmasked man. Then his dad and mom go in the cabin to get sally an go to a safer place. As they are walking they see an unmasked man and a unmasked man is hitting a teenager with a large rope whill she is tied with her hands on a wall . Mom sally said what mom said.We have to save that girl.We can right now.Dad we have to go save that girl .Ok sally lets go. Then they run up to the unmasked man and shoot him on his head. Then sally said to the teenager cmon we can go to go to a safer place.Ok the teenager said . Then they finally get to the abandid house that they will stay safe in.as they are in the abbanded house sally starts to talk to the teenager. so whats your name sally said.My name is alice whats yours alice said in a crying sad voice. im sally she said in a happy voice. Thats a nice name. thanks what happend to your parent and why where u alone?Well my parents where takend and drown to death until the finally died and i ran away but then the caught me and thats when the started hitting me and you came and i saw a better life for me and you.O thats sad i feel real bad for you alice.Dont worry i got over it.as sallys mom and dad are looking around the house to see if there is any food for them to eat suddenly they hear the unmasked men and runs to the children and tell tem shhh stay quiet .Then the unmasked men caught both of sallys parents and sallys pernts told sally and alice to run.So they did but then the unmasked men caught them and hit them with there gun and then they are in a room with walls scrathed on and then they wher still fainted
to be continued.
- by Konoronhkwa_TF |
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- | Submitted on 04/16/2009 |
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- Title: Sally:revenge of the unmasked
- Artist: Konoronhkwa_TF
- Description: This is a story of a sad girl named sally who lost her parents in a war in world war 2 .She did not know what happend to her parents so she thinks there still alive.So then she got sent to a foster home there she met lots of new friends. She has always wonderd how her parents wocld feel when she goes to them.But she wants to finally meet them and hug them.but sadly they are dead or are they read the story and find out if she ever gets to meet them or not meeet them.
- Date: 04/16/2009
- Tags: sallyrevenge unmasked
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Comments (3 Comments)
- meerodi - 04/18/2009
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wow, this is a really good story 3nodding Though you should work on separating it into different paragraphs.
P.S. Thanks for commenting on my story. - Report As Spam
- srslystop - 04/16/2009
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I agree with Nakai.
but its good. smile - Report As Spam
- Roxti - 04/16/2009
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when the person talks try adding " ". For example, "Honey, wake up." mom said.
Nice try though - Report As Spam