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The sparks from the flames looked like dancing fairies. Violet stood there shivering, the tears slowly falling down her cheeks. How could something so beautiful cause so much grief and sadness for her?
"Evan." she whispered, knowing what lie inside the burning apartment.
She had heard his desperate pleas for her to stay where she was, but she still fallowed him to that blazing apartment. And now she was swiftly moving toward it, it was almost like she was propelled by the strength of the love she felt for the boy inside. The little apartment was filled with smoke and ashes; she could see the flames were coming from the kitchen, a thanksgiving dinner gone badly. If she did not hurry and find Evan she knew she would be twisting on the floor in pain and agony. Through the living room filled with smoke violet made her way to the kitchen door. Violet had to adjust her eyes and hold her breath to go any further into the madness. The flames were blazing and hade engulfed the whole area, the ceiling was like a red and orange tornado of fire. Quickly she made her way inward the back of the kitchen past the middle island and toward the dining room. It too was engulfed in red and orange madness. Violets skin was burning; it felt like thousands of fire ants biting every inch of her body. Violet knew that she had to find Evan, no matter what it may cost her.
"Evan, you in here? Evan answer me please." Hiding her face behind her arms, shading her eyes from the paralyzing smoke, violet called for him again. With no answer she continued on her way through the fiery flames that had now surrounded her. All of a sudden violet heard something, a groaning. It was coming from the back bedroom. Violet approuched, through smoke filled eyes she saw him. Evan, oh Evan. What she saw next she was not prepared for. Sure smoke, fire and flames were on the list, but not this. Violet knew she had the courage to save Evan, but she didn’t know if her body had the strength. He lay there twitching, with dark crimson blood coming down from his nose and mouth. She ran to him knowing what she had to do next, she knelt down next to the convulsing body of the boy she loved. Violet rolled up her sleeve of her left arm and forced her wrist on to his blue lips, making him to bite down on her skin.
"Please Evan just do it, I can’t live one minute without you." Violet pleaded. Evans teeth bite down, and she gasped in surprise as she realized Evan heard her plea. A few seconds passed as violet looked down into his hazy eyes; she knew her heart could not go on without him.
"Stay with me please, don’t leave me. You promised you would never leave me!"
"I will violet, I will stay with you forever, I promise." With that last breath Evans Body went limp in violets arms.
The room started spinning and violets eyes went black.
- by colorfulravegirl |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/13/2009 |
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- Title: chapter one liquid moonlight
- Artist: colorfulravegirl
- Description: The teenage vampire Violet loses her one true love Evan.
- Date: 04/13/2009
- Tags: chapter liquid moonlight
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Comments (3 Comments)
- OoMEW-MEWoO - 04/24/2009
- NOO!! EVAN!! great writing, just a few grammer mistakes is all.
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- colorfulravegirl - 04/13/2009
- Yes, i hope so when i get back home i plan to start chapter 2.
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- Strwberry Mew Ichigo - 04/13/2009
- that was good... is there going to be more?
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