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It was a rainy nice and cozy day when I went over to Bobs house to play FIGHTERS okay witch place should we start in first? asked Bob well hmmm how about the jungle again? I asked okay he said then we turned it on and apeared in the jungle this time I was on the ground and he was on a thick tree branch I still looked like rambo I always look like rambo but more with my shirt off and all the other features I grabbed a black army shotgun and started shooting when I was out of bullets he started shooting at me in the end when he was out of bullets I was in a ditch trying to climb out but not being able too then I jumped out and he had my army shotgun and I was dodging the bullets for my life.
then..... I FOUND A MOTER CICLE AND WE APEARED IN THE CITY
he was in a car and I was on a moter cicle and found a shirt
put it on and drove as he shot we were both by now being chased by the cops and it had changed my look a little my hair was a little shorter and I had a beard... WTF HAPPENDED?!? in real life I looked like rambo too in this game it had changed my looks!! wtf I kepped on driving though intill the moter cicle disipeared and I was falling down on the ground with the black army shotgun in the jungle again then back in the country I got up and started shooting at him and I had my old looks back the shirt was gone too and then when I couldnt see him next thing I know hes in a jet shooting at me as I run
TO BE CONTINUED
- by the cow boy legend |
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- | Submitted on 04/12/2009 |
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- Title: another day another death 2
- Artist: the cow boy legend
- Description: 2 of this totelly bloody sereise
- Date: 04/12/2009
- Tags: another another death
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ArnauxAnderson - 05/26/2010
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Maybe I'm a stickler for grammar. I don't know...
But I absolutely despise your story. Mostly because it's completely and absolutely grammatically incorrect. I may not have the BEST grammar, but I know how to spell 'Totally'. And 'Cicle'. Maybe it's part of your story, I don't know. BUT it bugs me.
I apologize. - Report As Spam
- Nate for President - 04/14/2009
- Very cool, the images complement the story very well
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