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Chapter 1
sad times come in horrable timeing
Hidan and deidara arrived to the leaf,when kisa was being attacked by the nine tails,the nine tails saw the open spot kisa had when she lifted her arms to protect her face hidan saw the attack and figured out its intentions "kisa!look out" he yelled befor he saw smoke. After it was all cleared kisa was gone and deidara was on the other side of it holding kisa. Hidan sighed a sigh of relief "thank jashin" hidan said,just then he heard delilah scream deidara's name he looked over and the nine tails claws were face to face with deidara "gah!" they heard deidara yell as the nine tails drove its claws into deidaras face sending him flying into a tree still holding onto kisa. They landed into the tree hard enough to put a dent in it,deidara pushed kisa outta the way as the tree came down on his side traping him "gah *cough* ki-sa g-et outta here" he managed to say through blood kisa did what he told her and started to run towrds hidan. Kakuzu finally got up a little shooken up from the blast "ah ow dang that girl knows when to use explosive tags" he wisperd to himself, he did a quick 360 of the field and decided retreat was better for them "hidan get kisa and delilah outta here fast k i'll meet you back at the base" he shoughted over to him, hidan did a nod and grabbed delilah and with kisa they headed back to the base.Kakuzu got to deidara who was past out from the pain,he lifted the tree off of the bomber and lifted his limp form up. He headed back to the base away from the nine tails,....and away from the horror.
Deidara woke up groogly feeling bandages around him he hurt all over and couldn't seem to feel his right arm. Wait he couldn't feel his right arm?! he tried to get up but gasped from the pain in his abdomen and back "don't you dare move deidara i just got you back together" he heard kakuzu say he laid back down and tried to move his right arm but he couldn't "kakuzu wh wheres my ri right arm" he studderd kakuzu's expression turned sad,deidara tried to keep his eyes open but he past out again. Kakuzu looked at deidara's helpless form *poor guy,he'll be devastated if he finds out that his arm is gone,he couldn't keep his arm it was beyound repair* he thought. Pein held the piece in the meetng minus three members "hidan did you get the 7 tails" pien asked, hidan replied with a hint of a growl in his vioce "yes" pien nodded in reply "what about you kakuzu did you and the girls get the nine tails" he asked kakuzu, kakuzu shook his head "no we did not we almost sufferd three casulties kisa,delilah,and deidara" kakuzu reported pein glared at the thought of the akastuki failing once again at capturing the nine tails "they will recieve punishment when they heal" pien orderd hidan's mind snapped and he saw red "******** punnishment whats the matter with it,they just made a little mistake" his hologram faded out, pein sighed in frustration "zetsu go and tell hidan that he has a mission with kisa,kakuzu your with delila,tobi you and deidara go and see where the new 'team hawk' stands" pein orderd "under stood"the men said in reply to the commands,there hallowgrams also faded out pein spoke again "the rest of you will remain on stand by until told other wise". The others nodded.
Deidara walked awkardly through the tress lost in thought,tobi walked next to him worridly "sempi are you-" tobi tried to say but deidara cut him off "shush tobi-baka were almost there un" deidara wisperd fercly,tobi nodded sadly. They got to the edge of the trees and saw sasuke in the clearing, "ok tobi un, i want you too distract him alright" deidara orderd,tobi nodded and went out behind the uchia. Sasuke kept his eyes in front of him looking like he was expecting some one "naruto should be comeing any minute" he thought until he heard some leaves russling behind him,he tured to see a man looking around in his tweentys with a orange mask and a cloack with red clods on it, "hi tobi's a good boy tobi heard about you from itachi-kun your uchia sasuke" he giggled,Sasuke became quickly annoyed at this tobi person "lions barrage" he shoughted running up to tobi, tobi quickly dodged and ran behind a tree "your scary" he wimperd "it's all right tobi" they heard some one say. Deidara came out grinning widly at the uchia.
Akastuki pov:
A red headed man walked up to the base looking like he was beat up and scared,he was holding his right arm and he couldn't walk that well *s**t i have to get back into the base,maybe i can get kuzu to help* he continued to the base when he heard someone running up to him,then a yell "hey you get away from here,or so help me ill sacrifice you to jashin".The red head dodged and looked at the silver haired,vilot eyed nin who reconized him on the spot "no way" he shoughted aw-struck "no friken way sasori you,wow" sasori was gaping at the fact that hidan hadnt swore yet.A string of fire shot out to them,in time they both dodged it,but there was a ring of fire and a blonde lady with an ambu mask standing there "you two are mine" she sang glareing hatefully at the two Akastuki members.
Deidara's pov:
Deidara finally made Giant Gruda and was breathing heavily *:pant: :pant: gah now this is the finally* deidara held up his hand and yelled katsu,a hudge explosion formed around them,deidara flying away from the dust that held the little bombs in it,as the smoke cleared he saw no uchia any where,his smile grew bigger "HAHAHA YES MY ART WINS IT WINS" deidara shoughted extatic.Until he felt a presence behind him,he turned around and saw the sharnigan user.Sasuke took his chance and punched deidara in the face hard,deidara landed on the ground.He took out his hands and shot out two clay snakes at the uchia,sasuke counterd with lightning,deidara,not seeing the attack, was shocked uncontrollibly till he felll back on his back "he...hehehe...hahaha im gonna win,lets see you get scared huh?,un" he laphed out maincally,sasuke started at him, "SEE?! THIS IS WHY I HATE THE SHARNIGAN!YOU AND YOUR BROTHER,STOP ACTING COOL!" deidara yanked off his shirt and pulled out a hunk of clay,then he pulled out the stichings to the wired desine on his chest,reviling a mouth "lets see yah get scared now,i show you my greatest creation" he chanted putting the clay into the mouth ". . .SELF DESTRUTION" deidara yelled.Sasuke started in dis-belife "now lets see you get scared" he yalled "cry like a lost child,because my art..." he felt a single tear defietly rool down his face. (flash-back) "Deidara want to go to grandpa's dango shop with me" a blonde woman asked a little six year old blonde,the blonde boy nodded ferisouly "yah i wanna go i wanna go" he sang hugging his mothers leg "ok go ask your brother if he wishes to go" she smiled and laphed.The boy ran upstairs to his olderbrothers room "nee-san wanna come with me and momma to Ojji-chan's dango shop" he asked behind the door, every one was afraid Kichirou,he was dark and loved to experiment "no baka,get out of my room" he said darkly.Deidara nodded in reply and left his brothe alone,he hopped down the stairs and grabbed his mother's hand "momma he said to leave him alone" deidara replyed sadly.His mom looked sympathetic "its ok we'll go together".Then he rememberd while he saw his last image of sasuke,his brother had done and experiment on him on his seventh birthday,thats where the mouths came from,this was his curse,his sin and he couldn't help but feel sad for every one in his life ". . .IS A BLAST" he screamed out as he exploded disappering forever.
- by President the Megster |
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- | Submitted on 04/05/2009 |
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- Title: The final blow out
- Artist: President the Megster
- Description: chapter one,i am curently getting chapter 2 done this is based,well,actaully the begging is based on a RL me and my gaia freind Akatsukis_Female_Hidan ^^ so i hope yah guys like it
- Date: 04/05/2009
- Tags: final blow
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Comments (2 Comments)
- President the Megster - 04/06/2009
- thnx ill remeber that for the next one^^
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- curtisgolden4 - 04/06/2009
- its very good but i think that you need to replace the commas with full stops, this will make the writing easier to read and make it seem to flow more easily. also try not to put commas in all those places-if you put two in the words in the middle are meant to be ireelivent and the rest of the sentence will make sence without them.
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