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Chapter One: The Begining
As i walk around the bar in the night club, I almost wish I could drink. My friend Amy drunkly stumbles up to the bar and sets her shot glass on the bar. "So are you having fun Ellla?" I turn with frustration, "dont you think you've drank enough?" I said with a longing voice hoping she would say yes and we could just go home , but no she just ignores me and walks back to her table. Later that night I wonderd of into the woods , my friends to drunk to care where the hell i was. I was hungry..... anyone could see it in my eyes.....and anyone in the woods at this hour wouldn't be missed.
Chapter Two: The Birthday
"Happy birth day to you."
Every one chanted as Amy Blew out her candles. We were all now 21 exept for Dany he wanted to stay at home for his party , but his birthday would be next month. Now Amy, all she wanted to do was go to a bar and get drunk so we went with her to a night club.
Chapter Three: What Realy Happend
As the man turnd the west corner I began to hunt my prey, my strides where getting faster every second that passed and no cars or pedestrions would notice two friends push each other into the woods. Quicker and quicker a ran towards the man , grabed him by his colar and pressed him up againts a tree. I slowly sunk my teeth into his neck , after a few minuts i began to wonder what time it was so I let go and no one would bother to elert of a animal atack no one would suspect a Vampire. As his cold body fell to the ground I ran back to the night club and stood for 30 min. pondering weather or not to just leave or wait for Amy ... I left quickly for my house, time hadn't even passed by the time i got there.
- by kisa_cullen014 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 03/26/2009 |
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- Title: My Final Break
- Artist: kisa_cullen014
- Description: This book is about a girl (vampire ofcourse) Ella Stuart who i tied into going to a night club for her friends birth day but dose she tie with a murder or is this just normal for Ella to kill and leave ( Hit and run ^_^ LOL).
- Date: 03/26/2009
- Tags: myfinalbreak
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Kyo_Hattress - 01/13/2010
- maybe make the chapters a little longer, it's very interesting, i like the hook at the beginning
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- RockOnGirl12 - 07/03/2009
- I am sorry but this just doens't make since it would be great but..
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