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Order Of A Gentlemen
I felt even more drowsier when I got up than when I left the party. Me and Mai were up all night dancing to the music and partying. My other siblings could've gone as well but I expected them to say no which they did. Lesli wasn't really familiar with this country seeing as she just same from America 2 years ago. She can speak the language correctly but she still doesn't feel comfortable talking to other people (besides us siblings) with our language, instead she talks English and has to remind herself not to. Ying and Yang are also very different even if they are identical twins. Ying wants everything to stay the same as always but can handle some changes sometimes. While Yang loves enthusiasm and wants to be different. But somehow the two do not like to party. Ying had told me she would rather read and study some more while Yang said she would love to but had a paper due the very next day. All the personalities of my siblings were very different but me and Mai's were the same. Well mostly Mai was outgoing and fun but she had herself in control most of the time. Me and my siblings have been living under Grandfather's roof since we were 7 or 8 except for Lesli of course. I have been staying longer ever since I was 4 years old. My parents had abandoned me since then and Grandpa was the only one who took me in. He was very kind to me for the whole time I had stayed I never wanted to leave again.
The doorbell rang but nobody answered it. Which was peculiar because usually one of the workers had rushed to go to it and grasped the opportunity to show their talents. I was the only one in the lobby or the Grande Lobby as we called it. I could hear my footsteps click-clacking across the whole lobby. I didn't do much job to my hair or my clothes as that matter. All I was wearing was a Cute Strawberry tank top that almost showed my stomach and baggy pajama pants. My hair was up in the ponytail and was curled.
As I opened the door there stood the most cutest guy I have ever seen.He had black- brownish hair. His face resembled of a cute neighborhood boy from 10 years ago. I almost cried from tears of sadness when I saw him while heartbreaking memories flashed back.
"Uhmmm is Mr.Zhou here?" I snapped back to reality as I listened carefully to his voice playing it over and over, this was not the voice of my memory I have heard.
"How do you know grandfather?" I asked back looking at his eyes for the first time, grasping him.
"i have special business with him," he replied suddenly he passed my way, bumping my shoulder and almost making me fall over when a hand clutched me before I fell. I turned to see another beautiful guy behind me, he was not one of my workers. Suddenly I remembered someone that looked like him from long ago as well.
"Rey don't just do that to an innoccent girl its rude!" the handsome human said.
"My name is Lai," Lai said going down on one knee. How romantic? I thought unlike his brother over there. I assumed they were brothers since they did look alike except Lai looked much older well he didn't look he just seemed from the way he showed his manners.
3 more other handsome men came out from the door and soon my sibling followed into the Grande Lobby from upstairs.
The boys were all friends except for Rey and Lai who were brothers.
Their names Rey, Lai, Yao, Lee, and the youngest Jun.
These visitors had came here unexpectedly
And as me and my siblings stood there dumbfounded at this discovery of men out came Grandfather on his golden cain.
- by AyaChococha |
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- | Submitted on 03/20/2009 |
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- Title: Order Of A Gentlemen
- Artist: AyaChococha
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Jing is a girl who lives with her rich 4 siblings Lesli, Ying and Yang, and Mai
Their grandfather tries and find a erfect match for each and comes up with it. Their grandfather [the richest man in the country] has found five for all of the girls. Rey, Lai,Yao, Lee and Jun. Grandfather tries to match all of them but the girls don't agree and try to come up with a plan to stay together .Soon Rey falls in love with Jing but Jing doesn't seem to notice. What will happen? - Date: 03/20/2009
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- Meggie Marie - 03/20/2009
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