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The last thing i saw before i was broken
Was those beautiful blue eyes
The first thing i remembered when i woke up
Was your sparkling blue eyes
Everything drifts away when your not with me
Then it all picks up again when i see
All those pictures of us together
Staying close because we don't want to let go
I miss all those days, the days that won't be erased
Because those blue eyes used to be on fire
And i loved it
The perfect picture with no frame
Was your flawless face
The wonderful memory i can't remember
Was that one time
It was raining you and asked me to dance
We waltzed in the empty street and all i could see
Was my life, with you
It looked so beautiful to me
And all my days, with you looked so easy
Because with me in your arms everything
Was perfectly alright
- by starsxstreetlights |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 03/07/2009 |
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- Title: Your Blue Eyes
- Artist: starsxstreetlights
- Description: Just a "short" song I came up with. I dont know but I hope you like it:D
- Date: 03/07/2009
- Tags: blue eyes perfect memories
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Wind-Blown Dandilion - 12/23/2011
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Amazing smile if i could vote it would be 10/5 ^_^
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- President Gold Girl - 07/29/2009
- its ok i guess... ill give 3/5 well blue eyes?? i think its OK i mean u know
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- The Panda Guardian - 06/29/2009
- wow.. it is.. so awesome.. wish it was open for voting and i would write 1000000000000000/5 lol XD
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- Strwberry Mew Ichigo - 05/27/2009
- How sweet... if this was open for voting I would give it a 5/5.
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- Knited - 05/22/2009
- I really liked it a lot. If you could just space out the rhythm more evenly it would 'look' more appealing, but I'm sure it would sound great to music. Keep it up and you'll get better with time. 4 1/2 / 5
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- gyfdd - 05/06/2009
- I love it!
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- Xx_sasuXsaku_scene_xX - 04/27/2009
- I love it keep writing! 5/5
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