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"Jonathan and Elizabeth." The dying mother drew her last breath and told the names of her newborns.
"Mrs. Montiplei!" The housekeeper, Miss Anna ran toward to the side of Mrs. Montiplei's bed. The mother closed her eyes into eternal sleep. A few minutes later, Mr. Montiplei burst into the room with an exciting smile on is face.
"Mia! You gave birth to--" He took one glance at the bed and soon after there were several holes in the wall were Mr. Montiplei punched.
"MIA!" He shouted. He ran to her bed and took her head n his arms. She was as white as snow.
"Go! Take them away." He said. Miss Anna took the babies, put them both in a basket, and rushed out the door. Jonathan and Elizabeth would grow up and discover something that would change their lives altogether.
12 Years Later:
The day was particulraly rainy.
"Elizabeth. Let's go." Jon said taking his and her bookbag to go down the trail. Eliza was skipping rocks across Fera Lake.
"Okay." She grumpily dumped all the rocks she had collected and followed her brother.
"Here." Jon handed her her bookbag. They followed the trail until they came to a bridge that overlooked the waterfall of Fera Lake. They carefully walked across.
After reaching the end, they came to another point of difficulty. There was a ledge on the side of the mountain that they would have to cross to get to the other side since the main way was blocked by a massive boulder. The boulder probably fell when the lightning shook the mountain. Eliza inched across the ledge, Jon following carefully behind.
"Jon. This--This is-is scary." Eliza wimpered.
"It's gonna be okay." Jon said with a calm voice.
"But Jon, I think I heard something." Elizabeth said a little calmer. They crossed slowly.
Elizabeth jumped happily on the other side, safe from danger.
Suddenly, the ledge cracked and Jon plunged to the muddy puddles below. Just before he hit the water, Jon shouted back,
"Love ya, sis!" He disappeared through the puddles.
Nobody has seen him in England since.
- Title: Puddle Jumpers
- Artist: 0h Gh0st
- Description: This is a little entry of one idea that might've been thought up already, but anyways... i just wanted to post it.
- Date: 03/01/2009
- Tags: puddle jumpers
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Kazehana Haiku-san - 03/02/2009
- I like the concept of "puddle jumping." There is one show that does something similar to that though. Kamen Rider Dragon Knight lets people travel through reflective surfaces.
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- Takagawa Yan - 03/02/2009
- Heh, I like the idea. Are you planning on making more chapters to it?
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- Jay Shapeshifter - 03/01/2009
- nice idea, wink just clean up the spelling a bit.
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