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It was all a normal life until my mom sent me to Camp B.Mountain during Spring Break. "Why, Mom? I don't wanna go!" I whined. "Gabby, you'll have fun. Your friend Becca will be there." Mom said. I ran to my room, slammed the door shut, and cried on my bed. "Camp B.Mountain's stupid..." I muttered to myself. "What's worse is that I have to say for the whole WEEK!" My brother, Kurtis opened the door. "Haha. You have to go to a Noob Camp!" he teased. "So? You're going to Emo Camp!!!" I shouted. Kurtis stared at me. "Crud. You're right." he said, walking out the door. I grinned. "Who has to go to Noob Camp now?" I muttered. All of a sudden, my phone rang. "Hello?" I said. "Gabby! I heared the news!" It was my bff, Cathy. "About what?" I said. "You're going to Camp B.Mountain with the weirdos, that's what!" Cathy replied. "Well I'm going with Becca so I guess I'll be fine..." I replied back. "Not only her, but Brandon's coming too!" Cathy whispered, then hung up. Brandon's the hottest guy in all of High School and my crush redface . Now HE'S going too?! Hell, that makes it better!
I packed up everything and went out to the bus. "Bye Mom!" I shouted. "Bye Gabby!" Mom yelled. "Bye emo noob..." I muttered. "Humph." Kurtis said, crossing his arms. As I sat down, the bus started moving. "Goodbye home, hello Camp B.Mountain..." I mumbled. This was the start of Noob Camp.
- by xYukaXChanx |
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- | Submitted on 02/21/2009 |
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- Title: Preview of Camp Blood Mountain
- Artist: xYukaXChanx
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A bit of a comedy-horror story. I made it all up in my head just now. The music from the horror movie my mom and dad were watching made me wonder...
It will take a while to do Day 1 so be pacient my good friends! - Date: 02/21/2009
- Tags: camp blood mountain
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Comments (2 Comments)
- xYukaXChanx - 03/05/2009
- Wow nice advice man. I will work on that smile
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- Special Agent Odd - 03/04/2009
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I personally take that "noob emo camp" bit as an offense...
Anyways, you're grammer is pretty good... Try not to use emots in your stories. Other than that, it's good. Oh, and, try not to put things in your stories that will have a major offensive feeling in your stories, like the emo thing. Try going for Space Camp or something. Then, you can explain how you or your character thinks Space Campers are noobs, and so on and so forth. Just a bit of advice... *Click click* 3/5 stars. - Report As Spam