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my dream was that me and some of my friends went to this strange city. me and my best friend, blaze, saw what looked like a receptionist's office and we went in to ask where we were. as blaze and i walk into the small cylandrical shaped office and saw no one in there. as blaze and i tried to walk out doors came slamming in front of our faces!they were air packed tight, and air was getting limited. we then realized we were getting suffocated, and we would die! our friends outside were banging on the glass trying to get us out. i saw a slight crack and pushed on it before passing out, and we narowly escaped.
after that we knew something was wrong! we were in a town that looked similar to an old style neighborhood with those giant old huanted houses that we hear about all the time, but we were there! we were all frightened to travel but we had to. we keept witnessing pale people glarring at us harshly, like we were some sort of outcasts! we walked down a creepy rhode and keept on getting these strange and dangerous attacks out of the blue! we finaly went to a wooded area and one of our friends, katie, was acting very strange. when we stopped she was shouting and expanded like a giant ballon trying to crush us! i got a good look at her face and established that she was one of "them", what ever they are...
as we try to escape being crushed we all ran to the center of town where things got worse! we hid at an old creepy white house, but there was a boy standing in the window looking out at use. we tried to go in the house but we quickly found out that the boy was an evil spirit! we closed the door and ran away.
we found another group also running away from the palefaced terrors. we knew they were like us because they didn't have pale skin and black rings around their eyes, we quickly summarized our situation up and they did the same. as we ran, somhow, we were back, back home were there were no palefaced demons huanting our every move, but not everyone made it...
- by -Zack-the-ripper-Tomkin- |
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- | Submitted on 02/06/2009 |
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- Title: the dream scream
- Artist: -Zack-the-ripper-Tomkin-
- Description: ok, so last night i had this really scary dream, which i love, and I thought it would be a good movie/ book. keep in mind i people normally can't memorize every vivid detail of their dreams, the story could be missing something. anyways, lets get back on track, so i thought it would be a cool short story to read. anyways just vote what you think of it, THANKIES!!!
- Date: 02/06/2009
- Tags: scream dream
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Comments (5 Comments)
- The White Lily - 06/26/2010
- It would be so much better... if i could figure out what was happening...
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- katie-1029_734 - 06/17/2009
- gee im glad i get to be the one that turns!!! evil and cmon expanding?? i know you dream scarier try harder next time!!!
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- bluecheese14 - 06/17/2009
- tHAT sounds scary.. OUr minds sure can make alot of crazy things that it gets out of control.......
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- Warumono Sama - 02/15/2009
- Telling you what I think as you told me to do~ You need to first use spell check, you have quite a few misspelled words. Another thing would be to capitalize your beginning words and what not. There was one time where you somewhat repeated your self once. It was pretty good overall.
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- Ultra pazer - 02/09/2009
- sweet dude!
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