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I thought for an instant that I heard a small sigh coming from Nicolae, but then Beatrice bounded to his side, and if it weren’t for my good balance, she would have knocked me clean over. I brushed myself off, annoyed, and listened to their conversation.
“Hello Nicolae! Isn’t if funny always running into you like this? Isn’t it such a beautiful day out?” Beatrice spluttered unintelligently.
“Indeed, it is a beautiful day. You will have to excuse me. Rose and I are talking a little walk.” He said curtly.
“Oh.” She said, obviously not happy about me being there. I was so distracted and afraid that she might ask to come with us, that I didn’t notice Nicolae taking my hand and leading us away. Snapping back to reality, I felt my face getting warmer and warmer, and I glanced slowly up and Nicolae. He was looking at me with a slightly amused expression on his face, and then he winked at me. I felt myself smiling up at him too. “Beatrice is certainly a character, isn’t she?” Nicolae asked, and I nodded in return. Secretly I was happy that Nicolae had said this, I believed that he is the kind of man that preferred personality to body in women.
- by Strawberry Snow Kitty |
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- | Submitted on 02/01/2009 |
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- Title: Nicolae and I
- Artist: Strawberry Snow Kitty
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Description:
This is a segment from a piece I am currently writing, I got inspired by the character Nicolae on here, and my friend was asking me to write a love story staring her.... This is just a nice little part...Constructive critism only please!
Injoy, and please vote!!!! - Date: 02/01/2009
- Tags: nicolae rose romance lily sorbet
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Kirana Azadju - 01/20/2012
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"I believed that he is the kind of man that preferred personality to body in women."
Are you sure about that?! XD maybe if it comes to love...
Well done! give us more <3 - Report As Spam
- MishaMisha1213 - 08/09/2009
- when will u have more
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- i-wished-on-her-star - 07/27/2009
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I wanna read more! but I did find one mistake...
"talking a little walk" should of course be taking... - Report As Spam
- Angel-without-her-wings - 06/22/2009
- For a short part its well written, and I didnt notice any spelling errors, good work and let me know when you have more written ^^ I'd like to read the rest
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