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“Cassidy, you know I love you, but you can’t stay here. Not with Elizabeth. There are too many of them here,” Patrick begged, his eyes agonized by her continued refusal.
“But what about you?” she demanded. If she could cry, her cheeks would be streaked with tears. “What if they found out about us? What if they hurt you?”
He kissed her forehead quickly, reaching over her and opening the car door. “I can take care of myself,” he assured her in a rushed whisper, trying to push her through the open door. He hugged his daughter one last time, the barely one-month old baby sound asleep, warm in her blanket. He passed the baby girl to his wife, his eyes showing how desperately he didn’t want to say goodbye to the two of them, but knowing that their separation would be the best.
“I don’t want to leave you!” Cassidy screamed over the pounding rain.
“Nor I you. But this is for her sake, Cass. Surely you must know that,” he pleaded with her, gently pushing her from the car, their baby in her arms. “We will see each other again one day, when she gets old enough to know. But for now, we have to lie to her…in order to protect her.”
“How will I know when she’s old enough?” Cassidy stared back at him, taking in one last, long look at him.
“Just trust me. You’ll know,” he said with a sigh as he reached over the passenger seat and pulled the door closed, speeding away from them.
She almost ran after him but knew that she wouldn’t catch him in her condition. Slowly, she walked to the door of their small apartment, resigned to packing before their flight in the morning.
- by Dusty-chan |
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- Title: The End of The Beginning
- Artist: Dusty-chan
- Description: Yes, I realize that the title is a bit cliche, but it really makes since later on. The idea is probably also a little cliche, but I'm not too concerned with that right now. I'm curious to find out what people think about the actual writing. This is the beginning of an idea that I had while I was staying with me dad. I'm thinking about writing a book based off it. Please leave your comments. It'd be much appreciated. Please and thank you. Have a good day.
- Date: 01/25/2009
- Tags: beginning
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Comments (7 Comments)
- La Petite Estelle - 08/04/2009
- i like it alot ^^! 5/5!!!!
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- Denial Of Love - 07/21/2009
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REally good I guess, I give it a 5/5
it really is a cliffhanger, making me want to read more, but it really reminds me of some book I read. The first thing I thought was: vampires. I dont know why, and Im probably wrong, but still.. is the father like a vampire? No, Im not obsessed with vampires but that would make sense, but I could be wrong, PM and helpo me not be confused?
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- L M Ritwock - 07/20/2009
- Godgoodgood. It draws the reader in slowly. It's quite amazing. 10/5! I'd read this. Cliche's make the world go round. biggrin
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- xox_Cherry_Babe_xox - 04/13/2009
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Thats really really gd.
When your done can I read it I was really interested.
The title was really gd as well who cares if its a clique it suits the story.
11/5 - Report As Spam
- PeaceKarmi - 02/12/2009
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this is really nice. i mean, yeah the TITLE is a bit clique, but so what? i dont really see how the story is clique, but then i again, i dont know whats going on. darn you and your author's rights xD.
but yeah, its nice. a bit sad, but its nice. id like to know whats going on... - Report As Spam
- jesusfreak137 - 01/28/2009
- So....WHEN DO I GET TO READ THE REST OF IT?! You promised...when will it come true? Anyways, yeah, I liked it a lot. Savannah is right, You are a great writer. biggrin and Frenchie is right too,you are being mean by dangling that in front of us and not giving us more. So....WHEN DO I GET TO READ THE REST?! lol. rofl
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- FrenchieGirl - 01/25/2009
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I like it quite a bit.
The idea of the story is still quite vague and your teasing us by not giving us more info...
But contiune please, I'd like to know what happens. smile - Report As Spam