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it was a stormy night and i felt like eating something so i went to the refridgerator DANG IT i yelled there was nothing left so i thought to myself ill only be gone for a few minutes... so i got they keys and ran out the door. when i got to the store i noticed a hobo so i gave him some change. i went in and ran to the cerial isle and got some captain crunch. after i left the store i got into my car and started driving, halfway there i noticed the same car that was in the parking lot so i slowed down and turned onto 52nd bridgeway i looked into my rearveiw mirror and no1 was there i felt releived and suddenly i heard a loud bang coming from the top of my cari looked up and saw a black hole suddeny i relised that the black ness was the sky!!!!!!! i started driving puting my foot to the metal i sudenly saw the car again i turned on to my street and the car started picking up speed i started going faster. when i got to my house i got out and ran inside i locked all of the doors and hid under the bed. a few minutes later i heard footsteps on the roof i looked out and the ceiling popcorn started falling down. then i heard a big BANG now it was really falling. i huddled up into a ball and closed my eyes and then i heard a big bang again he had jumped into my house i saw his feet moving closer and closer and then it happened.
- Title: no end
- Artist: mithkitty
- Description: this is a story i call no end please rate and comment i would really like to see what you think about it and thank you for reading
- Date: 01/18/2009
- Tags: scarystory
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Comments (4 Comments)
- LOL15000 - 10/22/2009
- I really got lost pretty easily, Needs more description and No offense but you had a billion writing mistakes. The basic idea's really good though. 3 and a half out of 5. What? It's a free country. I can be a control freak. I CAN!!
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- too tsunami - 08/24/2009
- OMG I want more!
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- iKittyKitty - 01/20/2009
- good job!!! haha, i miss you!!
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- kurtainz - 01/18/2009
- wait...popcorn????
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