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Long ago, there were seven moons biggrin
that waxed and waned together. idea
The people treasured them as jewels in the sky
from the supreme god, Bathala. surprised
Down in the sea, biggrin
lived an enormous dragon called Bakunawa,
the god of darkness and despair.
One night, while looking at the moons,
he thought, "The moons are so cool and smooth.
Their brightness could light the bottom of the sea.
I wonder if they are as delicious as they look?"
Bakunawa decided he had to have a moon.
"There are so many moons
no one should notice one missing," he thought.
With a mighty leap he flew from the sea
and swallowed one of the moons.
Bakunawa proudly swam
with a glowing moon in his stomach.
As he swam, the moon moved in his body
tickling him and making him smile.
But soon, he noticed
that the moon was melting away like candy
- by MrJamesXOXO |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/29/2008 |
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- Title: The Philippine Dragon
- Artist: MrJamesXOXO
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Description:
This story is all about the Philippine Dragon the Bakunawa
- Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: philippine dragon
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Zweit - 01/04/2009
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Ah, so we meet again Reias.
I won't bother to repeat what the two below me have already mentioned. If this is really a poem then it's in the wrong section. If it's a story, then the formatting is ridiculous. Also, I find it queer that you compare the moon to candy.. - Report As Spam
- Reias - 01/03/2009
- I agree with the comment below, the usage of emoticons makes it seem like you are not taking the story seriously.
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- Evalyne Peirs - 12/30/2008
- It would be a better poem if you didn't use the emoticons.
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