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As the car backed out of the drive way and on to the small country side street, the boy came running down the small street, the boy chased after the car as it drove down the small street, he yelled the name of the girl several times. The girl looked back out the back window, she saw the boys face, he was crying as he ran, the girl rolled down the window and yelled the boys name as she started to cry, when the car drove farther down the small street it got harder for the boy to ketch up, the boys grew tired, as the car turned on to the busy street the boy stopped and fell to his knees, the boy was crying so hard his tears were puddling in front of him. He felt that he would never see the girl again; the girl felt the same while the car drove down the busy road.
- by rosemonster555 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/25/2008 |
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- Title: the boy and the girl
- Artist: rosemonster555
- Description: This is a piece I wrote when I was bored and it was late.
- Date: 12/25/2008
- Tags: girl
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Comments (3 Comments)
- GreanTee - 06/21/2009
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Uhhhh...what?
1/5. - Report As Spam
- Innocence4Days - 12/31/2008
- Hmm...... It's not very well written, no offense or anything. I do like the story though........ 2/5
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- Vexed Fire - 12/27/2008
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ugh. all these people writing on here are so childish.
this is a really random paragraph; its not very good either.
no hard feelings. - Report As Spam