are you there?

• Artist: insainartist
• Description: where is my love
• Date: 12/20/2008
• Tags: whereareyou falling goodbyecruelworld emptyness

where are you?
i can't find you.
there's an emptyness i sence
there is a hole that i can't fill
life is boring meaningless
there is nothing i can do to stop these thoughts from eating away at my soul
its almost gone, this ledge i'm standing on is getting slick.
i'm losing my footing, i'm about to fall. i need you to catch me.
oh no i'm falling i can feel the ground creeping up on me.
500...400...300...200...100...90...70...50... i'm almost there.
its almost over.
the pain will end soon.
oh look my friend the ground.
it has been a long time since i've seen you
i've been soaring for so long.
how can it be, it will all be over soon.
30...20...10...hello my old friend.
goodbye cruel world.

Comments

[Dargoo]

The format needs to be cleaned up a bit.

[SKBCTayuyaFluteofDeath]

I think this should be in Poetry/Lyrics, not Fiction, but it's still a good poem.

[Supreme Toxicality]

I don't think you trust in my
Self righteous suicide

This poem is sad. Good though, but it would be better if you didn't have SO MANY FRIGGIN GRAMMAR MISTAKES!! 3/5

[-_bandnerdboy10_-]

sorta depressing 2/5

[xxtwisteddreamzx]

its pretty good 3/5

[lolamber1234]

its not as good as mine