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Amber lost.
Chapter one: welcome all
2 people sat in a compartment together, one guy and one girl. The man was 16 earth years old, 4 UT (Universal timepiece) years. The girl was 17 earth years, 4.5 UT years, and 90 on her home planet. English became a universal language because it was easiest to replicate. Next up was Invan, witch the woman spoke also, and then Oni, for the English translation matched up with the creatures that spoke it, only not as evil. The boy spoke pigeon Oni. They were in a small ship. There was a deck that didn’t rely on the cameras but there were equal controls in the ship’s deck and the sleeping compartment. The boy wore a blue robe and yellow hat. It was pointed. He had this look in reference to a character from a game he liked. His shoes were black and his face was shadowed. His name was John. He was a magician. The woman wore a coat also. It just covered her torso. It was pink and padded. She wore black pants, leather, and brown shoes. She had deadly red hair in a long ponytail. She had a long sword on her back. She was looking at her face in the mirror. It was a large room. 2 beds were on opposite halves of the room and a curtain could cut the 2 halves off. They both had the same decorations. One bed, a line of drawers, a place where you could look at your self. It had many mirrors, 2 blue circles on the floor, as opposed to the grey of the wall and floor, with shower curtains hanging around them. This was a medical checkup pad. You had to strip down for it to completely scan you. It would also heal cuts and other small wounds. There was a small room to the side of each half. It had a shower and a toilet. There were water generators under the ship. They were by the engines. That was the most expensive part of building the ship, witch belonged to John. His dad had built it for long distance. They were heading towards a school where they could focus on battle. It was a quiet journey. The woman, Jena, had met other wizards. They taunted her for her home world. She didn’t know about this wizard. After they passed an asteroid field John asked “Why aren’t you talking to me?” Jena just sat there. She was almost ready to cry. She lost her father to the very reason she had been taunted. John looked into her pained face. He frowned, tough it was unseen, while he looked at her. Jena got ahold of herself and looked at John. “It’s just that most people hate me for my home world. But I guess you wouldn’t have gone there if you hated it.” Jena said. She smiled and so did John. “Well now, I have heard of that, but I don’t think anything of it. Normally people under that reputation wouldn’t even take a free ride. So I think you are safe from any reputation here. Let us speak of it no more.” John said. Jena smiled more. “I like the way that conversation went.” Jena said. They talked for the rest of the sun orbit. There was nothing much. They both looked when they saw a golden nova. It was a large explosion that got rid of waste that is naturally created by comments and such and it leaves beautiful after colors. People look at it for hours. After they passed they went back to talking. It was time for sleep cycle on the ship. They showered and went to bed. They woke up to another golden nova. They looked at it and then they went to the deck. John went to the navigation computers. “We are almost there. Just a little.” John said. So they talked a little more and then they saw it. It was a space station rotating around a sun with no planets. They packed up there things and waited at the deck. They landed on the ship. “Welcome to Amber. Please wait for a representative to come by.” An automated voice said. The hull opened. 2 men wearing white outfits came out.
- by skywerwolf |
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- | Submitted on 12/19/2008 |
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- Title: Amber lost
- Artist: skywerwolf
- Description: well i just started writing this when i had a fancy to make a story like this. its odd because a little after writing this i relised its like an old idea that i scraped. so i guess this is a remake. hope you like it. please comment.
- Date: 12/19/2008
- Tags: amber lost
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- Not_Goth_Just_Me - 05/13/2009
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sounds interesting
did you continue it?
if so please pm me the link or the title of the next
is Amber the name of the space station? - Report As Spam