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I couldn't breath, i was looking into blood colored eyes. They were filled with hate, pain, ad sorrow. His lip coated with a red liquid, fangs pierceing out of his mouth. My hand was covering two puncer wounds in my neck. His eyes opened wide and change back to dark brown with gold around his puples, he was my best friend. "....w-why?" i said. His reaction was lookig at his blood stained hands. I felt dizy, my legs caved in, i feel in his arms and passed out. I woke up in the hospital with a needle in my arm that had a tube running up into a bag of blood. "blade?" i said I looked around the room he was sitting in a corrnor. "Haveing fun in your emo corrnor?" He looked up with the same red eyes. The doctor walk in "what happened?" he asked. Images flashed through my head of what happened "ummmm.... It was dark and there was glass on the stair case i triped on a step and feel on two pieces of glass landed in my neck, deep in my neck." I had too lie to cover blades case. " What about this young man? He came here covered in blood. Was that your blood?" He said. "Yes. Im sorry for scaring you." I said. " You will be able to go tomorrow."
"Thank you." I said. After the doctor left blade stood up and he was under controll. " Are you okay?" De said the sound of his voice made a singal tear roll down my eye. " Dose it hurt?" He said filled with regret. "No, the better question is are you hurt?" I said not realizeing what i've done. "Yes" he said "its okay" i replyed "NO! ITS NOT OKAY! YOUR A VICTOME" he yelled. "I'm going to go see if you can cheak out early."
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- by II Vampyric Slayer II |
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- | Submitted on 12/01/2008 |
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- Title: the eyes of a vampire
- Artist: II Vampyric Slayer II
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chapter 1 bond by blood
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- Date: 12/01/2008
- Tags: eyes vampire
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Comments (7 Comments)
- vampire19710 - 06/14/2009
- umm if u have more message me!!
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- kelly684 - 06/12/2009
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u should describe how they met a lil better...
other than that i loved it - Report As Spam
- The_unborn_sin - 05/31/2009
- omg the suspense
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- Avenged Vampire86 - 01/01/2009
- That's good...but I'd check the spelling...and try revising. But otherwise it was pretty good.
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- Dragon_Fears - 12/05/2008
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Awesome good thing you plan on continuing it..
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- xxSora1144 - 12/02/2008
- it's pretty good
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- gotmadluv4jesus1 - 12/02/2008
- luv it
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