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I walked home in the rain, watching my hair curl and frizz in front of my face. It was 45 degrees outside, I couldn't feel my hands. My legs and feet hurt so badly they went completely numb. I walked the 3.8 miles home, which would take me about three hours. Yesterday had been a perfectly sunny day, apparently weather changes, at least that's what I thought as I looked down at my dark blue t-shirt and denim shorts. No jacket, no umbrella, nothing. Just the warmth of my soon to be completely numb body. "He" was walking behind me, my heart-breaker, my ex, my no good cheating, lying ex, John. He was probably trying to harrass me, or maybe just embarrass me in front of everyone. I was five minutes away from my house, but John wouldn't stop following me. I had no choice, even with all the pain I was feeling I had to lose him. I ran the curb and jumped the wall, I heard his footsteps speeding up. I ran faster, and hid between two small walls behind a white broken gate someone had bend so they could fit through. I held my breathe, my stomach was about to explode, my vision blurred out; I passed out. I woke up, looking around confused. I was at the same place I was when I fainted. Except, this time, there was a jacket over me, and a letter..
It smelled like John's cologne, and the letter read:
Most guys just say sorry, I give you my JACKET.
-John
P.S. I'm sorry..
- by PeaceLoveZuld |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Meggie Marie - 06/29/2010
- I love it. Although I don't think it takes 3 hours to go three miles. It takes me 4 hours to walk 7 miles.
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- Dark Bishounen - 12/01/2008
- It's impressive and descriptive. Nicely done.
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- lX_xRaInBoW_RaVeRx_Xl - 11/27/2008
- Awsum Zuld Good Job! i had no idea when i met u on cp that i was talking to some one with a great creative mind
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- Lost-in-Dreamland-again - 11/27/2008
- naw, thats sweet! keep going it looks really good!
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- i-iSh-jUjU - 11/27/2008
- thts cute i like it <3
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