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When I was in my homecoming a saw Joshua the most popular and beatifull boy in the entire school some boys are jelouse that i look at him and decied not to like someone eles well is my rpoblem not them, sometimes I wish they all go to hell or f..ck them self some where eles. Well maybe one of this day's they will all know how that feels. Anyway my names Devora im 16 years old my father christopher always so protective with me he dosnt let nayboys hug me he thinks something is going to happend. My friend Sarah she's funny but sometimes anoying you never know when shes going to keep talking about the same thing over and over agian.
You can see her always wearing her pink shirt and whit skirts she's always smiling no wonder boys ask her out. Most of the girls are jelouse and sometimes that makes me feel kinda jelouse but im stil happy for her she has her boy-friend cristian there for her so I think thats the part I dont like but what the heck was I suppose to do she's my friend and she deserve her freedom so I wasen't going to get in her way thats like stilling candy from a kid's hand.*sigth*I will never understand why she tell's me to find a guy they are so annoying well aside from Joshua now his a hottie and his smart to so theres no way im going to denai if he ask me out but I know that was not going to happend he was to popular with the girls that is totally imposable for him to ask me out well I was wrong he was walking the same direction has I was and then he stop me and ask me out:
Joshua: Hey uuhm deovora rigth?
Me: yeah
Joshua: would you like to go for dinner tonight with me if thats ok with you?
Me: sure I'll love too
Joshua: cool well see ya around
Me: bye
WOW I'm so happy the guy i like just ask me out but i wonder if something is going to happend during dinner ooh who the f..ck am I fulling nothing is going to happend not tonigth. MMMh tonigh dinner with him is going to be so romantic but sunddley when i was getting home the door was open i went inside and my father was in the floor his leg broken i didnt know what happend then something behind me I try to run but it got me and i was onconsuise I was afraid but i wasen't at my house anymore where was I goin I didnt know but it wasen't going to be nice I felt something really dangerous is near me and I may or not die tonigth
- by Lia Fletcher |
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- | Submitted on 11/26/2008 |
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- Title: Vampire hiding love
- Artist: Lia Fletcher
- Description: When theres someone you love you dont know they love you back like for this girl she falls in love with this vampire but he hides his love for her. He ask her out just to keep her away from danger
- Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: vampire love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Mistress Ylva - 09/16/2011
- That Is Really Good. You Have A Few Run-on sentences and spelling errors. Other Than That I Can't Wait To Read More Of The Story. smile
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- Summer Fallwinterspring - 01/11/2009
- YOU ARE SO ORIGINAL.
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- scoutsgirl101 - 12/16/2008
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awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sweet sweet!!!!!!!! - Report As Spam
- cry_102 - 12/14/2008
- love your story, though your a little scratchy with the spelling,is there a part two?
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- pu3 dayana - 12/13/2008
- good but some spelling error
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- littlemissshortyy - 11/29/2008
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not bad
not bad at all - Report As Spam
- JAN STAFF3 - 11/27/2008
- very lovely you have my 5/5
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